Okay... version 2, with guitars, drums, keys and voice.  Yea, I recorded this using audacity.... Very rough draft is here (v1): http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6962.html if you guys don't remember
If you guys remember before from v1, that it was not good and this one is way better! In version 1, i did this song with a guitar, but the idea started with the keyboard, so I put it backed there. And ofcourse the vocals is not over-the-top job so I am going to have my friend do the vocals (the one who did Aimless) for this song. Hope you guys have a fun listening!!

Here's the lyrics again:
What is left?

What is here, what is there?
What is left, and what has not?
what is right, and where is right?

how much we know, we just don't know
when we ask these things, the rain keeps falling down
the landfill rise, suphocate the sky

there's no end, are we only here to watch?
this sight of empitness walking with us
looking for something, that is more than
nothing

more than nothing
oh... we want more, yea

why do we look? and where should we look?
what else is here? are we satisfied?
grabbing so hard, only finding

the broken light is shining bright,
it's so dark, its exhausting to our eyes
if it was shattered, is a view of  a thou-

sand lives... full of lies
we want more than we
could ever have
we want more, we want more,
we want more!

What is here, what is there?
What is left, and what has not?
what is right, and where is right?
Is this what life has to offer?

Praises and critiques are always welcome!! Thanks

man, I think you've improved alot. The music is pretty damn good in my opinion. drums could be a bit punchier in some places. keep working on your singing. Its not bad but its just not strong enough for the style of music.

ace song

Ian

Very well done..Good voice a bit of tunning work but nothing that keep at it will not do...Nice song structure and mix is quite tastefull too.Sounding good to me....

Very Emo or whatever... nice tune...mix work needed.  A bit thin! Needs a bit more punch but this one has potential for sure... I could hear this on the radio easy... a bit o mix work and your done.

yea... definitely I'm gonna keep on working on my vocals