Hey. So I borrowed some lyrics from Simon made a few changes and here it is. Just for fun I tuned down a semitone so here's dark blues in Eb minor (http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/37936.html). Enjoy.

Hey Babe, I got this need that I feel
Like a slo-gin fizz on a Ferris Wheel
Feels like you're too far away
I wanna know that when you look my way,
My world still disappears -
Well it all just goes away

When I see you in the night time
It’s like the sun ain’t ever shined
And when I see you in the morning
Oh babe, I might as well be blind

And when I’m stumbling in the darkness
Darling please, don’t let me down
'Cause don't you know that it's your touch that
Raises me up to higher ground

Big wheel keeps on turning
Can't step off while it’s spinning
So I'll watch this world go ‘round and ‘round and ‘round
Until it all just goes away

Wow great performance..Your quite the song writer...I heard the other song you posted and got to say I really enjoy your knack for melody and guitar chord progressions..Keep it up tons of talent in that head of yours!!!!Great voice too!!!Some sound recording improvements would benefit you for sure,but still this is great!

Its refreshing to hear some genuine talent in the song writing department. Everything was 100% until the wee guitar solo came in. Imo, It didn't suit, and there was also a hiss that came and went with the guitar solo (but that can easily be fixed). Maybe a spannish guitar solo would be more suited to this. Apart from that, ace song. nice playng, singing, and recording quility.

Ian