written by torry

torry: vocals, bass, guitar
me: drums
broderick: keyboard

I forgot to say I put this in the battle so if you want to vote please do so

Sick bass, not a fan of the lead guitar. I'll give you a 90% just because the arangement was sick and the bass is boss. The lyrics are sick, but the nu metal feel is annoying

At least you're better than me!

Yeah baby!  Love that bass and diggin the groove... damn shame I can't hear the vocals very clear... the chorus kicks in and it reminds me of Lou Barlow's stuff...  Definitely original and offbeat... cool vibe...

Hey man, that's some great stuff!!! I think you've gottta tone down the vocals a bit... kinda drowns out the rest of the instruments...
 
Yeah jackfancy has a point... it's offbeat quite a bit...

Good lyrics and arrangement...

Anyways, this song could go pretty far... Just gotta work on your recording a bit...

Sounds good!

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i liked everything but when the vocals harmonies it sounds like bad doors at that point to me.
bass is gud.

loving tht bass...again nt a fan of the lead guitar n the vocals are a bit overpowering

Hot.. vote fer battle 86%

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soloing a bit weak though............drums try to stop it from dragging.........tuning poor in guitar in particular.

great song.............. lazy production......

     

Swordfish

Definitely, sounds hot.

Low quality production, but I think it supports the mood of the song. Sounds vintage 

It sounds live. I think you guys need to somehow improve the quality of the recording, and get the right levels for all of your tracks. This song has the potential to be really good, once you've achieved a decent recording sound.... It'll be worth it!

Ian

I'm poor, I have a xenyx 1202 mixer run through audacity with two cheap microphones, I don't plan to re-record this and part of it was recorded live,  I'm not a professional and I don't care if it sounds unprofessional so please don't tell me how it sounds low fi

I didn't mean to offend, i'm just giving my opinion. We're all poor though (well, most of us)... so it just depends on what you're priorities are. If you don't care about sounding professional (which you've just told me you don't), then don't worry about it. However, You can get a decent setup for around 100 quid ($180) nowadays, which would buy you a condenser mic, a preamp and an audio interface (of course, it depends on how many mics you want (usually you need at least three to mic a drumkit properly), so that would cost more). Once you got the setup, you could take a bit of time mastering the song, and getting rid of the hiss etc by using editing programmes. A song this good deserves a good recording....  All im saying is, if you love making music, then its worth it

lol man this is GROOVY!!! or something...lol
I have a Xenyx 1204FX...not much better. kudos man

I am really digging this

I'd like to see the words read off the page. They sound pretty good from what I can tell.

You know how I'd like it to sound even tighter since you've been in the position to see me demand that in the past - but I know in a way, this particular recording showcases and enhances the mood of the lyrics and the melody. It probably would've lost a little with each layer of gloss that could've been added.

Kudos are in order.

poorly recorded...