this is by far the best song ive heard today and it could really make it to the top of the charts if you iron ut a few of the little creases in the vocals.

Guitar does get just a tad repetitive, but its not realy the star of this song anyways.  It just provides backup to your great vocal work!

rtwetghwerg

A simple and fluent love song you got, but too tedious and traditional for my liking.  Try making a chorus with a different chord progression.  Not too shabby!

like the chorus ... but am i the only one that thinks the guitar sounds hideously out of tune?