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#1June 14th, 2005 · 09:11 PM
14 threads / 12 songs
76 posts
Indonesia
Rayz-baby I Love You
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Score: 60.5%
Rank: 29th
Battle: 2005-07


a "Rock A Mellow"  music...
This is a very simple song with such a great tunes...i recorded it at mt dorm room...using only a guitar and a cheap mic...hope you'll like it....
GBU!

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#2June 22nd, 2005 · 03:09 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
23 posts
Venezuela
Very enjoable
#3June 22nd, 2005 · 11:20 AM
126 threads / 32 songs
1,411 posts
United States of America
you pretty good!  nice voice, and i like the guitar part... it's not so repetitive that it's painfully noticeable, yet it carries the music very nicely.  good job with that

i'm not sure about the "woo!" part, but it definitely gives it more personality!  i think it should stay :P
#4June 22nd, 2005 · 10:51 PM
14 threads / 12 songs
76 posts
Indonesia
tq
thx a lot for your comments guys...=)
i really2 appreciate it...a lot...hehehe....wait for my next song...aite...=)
love n peace!=)
#5June 23rd, 2005 · 05:21 AM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
Awww i really like this, and I know its gonna be stuck in my head all day  
#6June 27th, 2005 · 03:40 AM
25 threads / 23 songs
127 posts
United States of America
yeah
no dough, stuck in my head, it's one catchy songs, right on!!!!!, i like your voice a lot, it;s like honest, and I guess you really love her/him, It could be a guy or girl song, my girlfriend loves it,he he, she asked why I didn't make songs like yours, I said, I simply might  , keep it up rayz, you are on the right track to radio, if my girl approves, it must be good 
#7June 28th, 2005 · 12:54 AM
14 threads / 12 songs
76 posts
Indonesia
correction....it's a bout my ex-girl...i'm straight...=) may be sumday i can hang out with u guys and make a song...i haven't got a chance to visit US...maybe sumtimes...=) Keep on rockin...Keep on mellow...Rock A Mellow rulez!!!

-Rayz-
#8June 28th, 2005 · 11:56 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
23 posts
Venezuela
Correction :)
hahahaha, sorry,  I didn't imply anything "and I guess you really love her/him, It could be a guy or girl song" now that I read it again, yea I could of written it different

Cheers
 Rod
#9July 23rd, 2005 · 07:31 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
31 posts
United States of America
Not bad, not bad
I almost made up this exact riff, but it never got anywhere for me,
what can i say, geniuses think alike.

recording is a Little bad but i assume that's just a result of home recording.

Its still lacking something, oh yeah, a catch.

something to pull me in, if you had something in here that would really pull me in, then it would be awesome.

but for now, it is a not bad.

keep it up
#10July 23rd, 2005 · 07:46 AM
4 posts
United Kingdom
G D Am C...... I rest my Case


BORING!!!!!!!!!


But very good vocals!
#11July 23rd, 2005 · 04:20 PM
37 posts
United States of America
I really like the vocal at the end.  I disagree with motherman, it's not boring at all. Great songs have been written around less chords.  Nice work, I'm going to listen to more of your stuff now.
#12July 24th, 2005 · 12:01 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
16 posts
Brazil
Nice!!
#13July 24th, 2005 · 11:00 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
4 posts
Romania
Nice song, it really caught me!Nice voice!
However,maybe try to loose the effect on your guitar, a straight clean guitar sound would have been better!
#14July 25th, 2005 · 12:20 PM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
Good vocals, and a nice tune...but I agree that the guitar definitely needs some variation - chordally, rhythmically and melodically. Nice track all-round though.
#15July 26th, 2005 · 08:03 AM
20 threads / 18 songs
93 posts
United Kingdom
Get a bit of plastic surgery and wobble yer head a bit and it could be David Grey except i cant stand him but this is by far a much bigger bar..like a Mars or perhaps Chunky Time Out with 25% extra free. Nice.
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