i like it. you have a very nice voice. i like the way it changes from the verse to the chorus. maybe it should get into the chorus quicker though. good work  oh and i love the ending

pretty good but the bit of a scratch in the voice is good but sometimes it seems you over do it a little. But otherwise, it's great!

It's true. You have a very good voice. And the song is nice. But with this voice...every song will sounds great!

thank you for laying your soul on the table for all to see. if only more of todays music could be like this. in my opinion though its lacking in depth of sound. if you added a bass line and a simple but effective drum beat i think you could take this to the next level. great work.