Acoustic Rock with an edgyness rare to acoustic rock.

Hey, I sure hope you all like this song, I'm proud of it.

I like the song, but I won't agree with your claim that the edgy acoustic feel is rare.  I will, however, defend to the death your right to say so.

The melody seems like a bit of a string of clichés, which, although it serves its purpose well here, I am not a huge fan of.

Placing the final five seconds of the song next to the first five seconds shows that you sped up a good deal throughout the song.  This is fine, as long as it's intentional, just saying... Were it my song, I'd play the opening chords as slow as it starts, because I must say that was very nice, and immediately pick up the tempo upon the start of the first verse.

u sound like oasis kinda

It's nothing spectacular musically, but it still ROCKS. You got a great voice, find a band to back you up and you could make some money.

The mix is great.

Craig
SUNERAL

I agree. Wish I hada voice like that. You know how to convey emotion with it, too.

yeah, your emotion is easy to hear in this.  very nice. i like the sound of this song!

i'd switch up the melody during the "i'm sorry for every time" part after you go through it once or twice.  it feels a little repetative as is.  It's a wonderful set of notes, don't get me wrong.  i'd love to hear it hit a higher note during this part, though, as a set of triplet-notes as you close the chorus.  once again, though:  nice job.  too many people can't put emotion into their songs... you've done that very well, i think

Hey, thanks for the tips and compliments.  I'll  try switching up some of the melodies in the chorus part for live shows, but it's all recorded and finished as far as for a CD goes.

Hey man, I like it, keep up the good work

I love how straight forward the song is. I've always loved a bare song with emotion. Sometimes too much production can sterilize a song. I agree though that I'd like to hear it with a full band.

I love the emotion! The emotion!!

I agree with andymohawk, keeping it simple is good, now you said some about a CD, just mind you, you're flat at the end, try to punch just the end, remember the end is what most people remember, cheers and keep it up!!!!!!!

Have to agree with everyone about the voice, really nice, reminds me of the stone temple pilote (plush)... Will listen to more of your stufff if its on here 

u have a great voice, but the song it's quite flat and sometiems repetitive, but it's prety good!

Hey everyone, thanks for all the tips and compliments, they are truely appreciated.  If anyone wants to hear more, my whole CD's on www.intopieces.com and I have a few songs on www.myspace.com/mikeanderson

thanks guys,
Mike Anderson