A wee song about my deep, secret love for cigarettes.  Even though I quit a while ago.

me too .........

the recording sounds like one mike ??

so well done

fish
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See I was just getting there then this ,NLg,nice groove an the singing was in character ,reminded me } horse with no name & that would be a Camel i guess,keep up the good work 

Just steppin out 4 a fag 

Ha...I lit up a smoke..I walked to the computer..and what do I see...yep...This is pretty good...Been awhile since you have posted a song...nice to see your still at it...this will be playing in my head now...when I light up I'm going to hear this song even louder(I need to stop...but, Oh Oh Oh)...nice work...if its a one mic recording its not to bad...not bad at all...Damn good...

Flyer

I would love to see the lyrics posted.....


Will Rate

Oh I came back to say..that your vocals and your delivery have improved a lot...more confidence  is what hear  !!!

Thanks for the feedback guys!
Flyer, glad to hear you see improvement in my vocals    Thanks.

Yes, recorded with one mike.

Lyrics:

I told myself that I quit
I told my girl and all my friends
But once in a while
Once in a while

It's not something I really like
It's not something I want in my life
But let me tell you
Let me tell you

In the morning
In the evening
On break at work
At the T station*

I want a cigarette
Oh oh oh
I want a cigarette
Oh oh oh oh

I tried to run and get real strong
I tried to eat well and get good sleep
But, oh man
I just give in

I see other people lightin' a butt
It looks so nice and soothing
And there I go
One more time

*[T is short for MBTA, Massachusetts Bay Transit Authority, the trains and busses in MA]

More music to come.

I almost gave up ater smoking for 30 years, went 2 years smoking a bout 2 a week, went on holiday last year, smoked a bit now smoking 10 a day.

They say once a smoker always a smoker.

Keep up the no smoking dude,

Like the relaxed feel to the song.

Cheers

Denis

i had to laugh when you started the oh oh oh,

thats a good thing

you bring this song well, simple, straight

so is my review

Its amazing how catchy the oh oh's are!! I love this. Very simple but has something great about it.

btw I smoke 30 a day but at least cigarettes is my worst vice for now!!

this song is really good man.I like the vibe. its a great progression.the quality totally fits the subject.good job bro

The song that is ,very cool funny and serious but above all catchy....the vocal hook chorus is near perfect...
Japan has smokers airline , they fly to Dubai ,scrubbers running overtime ,they would love your song ...try them.   ratehigh

Hey guys,

Thanks for all the positive feedback!  Very glad you enjoyed it.

I just need to write more than 3 songs a year :-p

Sit down with a pack of  ...... chewing gum and write some more songs dude (lol).

I really like this more every time I hear it - so natural and spontaneous. A simple tune, both guitar and vocals are clear and firm and a real feel of fun about it!

Had to stop in for another listen...still loving this song

Someone really has to kick my ass, I haven't written a new song since this one I think.......

well, I dont think a ass kicking is really what you need...just write when it hits you...or something comes to you....Dont force creativity..thats my advice.....I'll be looking for your new stuff..even if it takes you a few years..lol..
BTW..I have smoked one cigg today...I'm trying to slack off of smoking...
Flyer