As it is, I like it as an acoustic piece....  Though still could use some drums, and a nice soft bass line...  Also could be great with a full band, and more aggressive vocal delivery...  This is one of those songs you just can't help but like... which you sir, seem to be very good at writing...  Very easy on my ears, and great vocals too my friend..

                  JimK

loved the song...
and the recording is no that bad man..
the lyrics are nice..

i loved it!

greatwork..

WOW!

   This is GOOD!!!

I know not much help in Ideas.... but it is good! 




-NT4M

I must agree completely with JimK "This is one of those songs you just can't help but like... which you sir, seem to be very good at writing... "
You keep on coming out with real beautiful songs, but their never 'just songs', they are always intrinsically beautiful songs.
As I hear it now I disagree about the 'band' idea, I really like it as it is, sheer simplistic beauty , ok if you really want more instruments they must be as minimalistic, a jazzy tin drum and snare and a box bass or something on those lines!
I also love the lyrics, again simply perfect words for a song.
I have one itch though "and I can't help myself to think" , and it keeps on itching because the rest is perfect but that's not ! Its either 'I cant help my self thinking' or 'I cant help my self, for thinking........' you could also use 'from' but then the line changes to 'I cant stop my self from thinking.....' , Just trying to help out.   

thank you Kings
I didn't realize that that sentence sounded bad I will change it my english sometime let me down and I always appreciate when someone tell me the right way

O'r may be it's "and I can't help thinking to myself....." 

i would add chorus, i expected them several times