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#16April 1st, 2008 · 08:38 AM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
very nice
As it is, I like it as an acoustic piece....  Though still could use some drums, and a nice soft bass line...  Also could be great with a full band, and more aggressive vocal delivery...  This is one of those songs you just can't help but like... which you sir, seem to be very good at writing...  Very easy on my ears, and great vocals too my friend..

                  JimK
#17April 8th, 2008 · 06:47 AM
5 threads / 2 songs
51 posts
India
loved the song...
and the recording is no that bad man..
the lyrics are nice..

i loved it!

greatwork..
#18April 9th, 2008 · 09:39 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
122 posts
United States of America
WOW!

   This is GOOD!!!

I know not much help in Ideas.... but it is good! 




-NT4M
#19April 11th, 2008 · 07:00 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I must agree completely with JimK "This is one of those songs you just can't help but like... which you sir, seem to be very good at writing... "
You keep on coming out with real beautiful songs, but their never 'just songs', they are always intrinsically beautiful songs.
As I hear it now I disagree about the 'band' idea, I really like it as it is, sheer simplistic beauty , ok if you really want more instruments they must be as minimalistic, a jazzy tin drum and snare and a box bass or something on those lines!
I also love the lyrics, again simply perfect words for a song.
I have one itch though "and I can't help myself to think" , and it keeps on itching because the rest is perfect but that's not ! Its either 'I cant help my self thinking' or 'I cant help my self, for thinking........' you could also use 'from' but then the line changes to 'I cant stop my self from thinking.....' , Just trying to help out.   
#20April 12th, 2008 · 06:46 AM
110 threads / 55 songs
463 posts
Nepal
thank you Kings
I didn't realize that that sentence sounded bad I will change it my english sometime let me down and I always appreciate when someone tell me the right way
#21April 12th, 2008 · 07:33 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
O'r may be it's "and I can't help thinking to myself....." 
#22April 13th, 2008 · 12:47 AM
21 threads / 16 songs
49 posts
Peru
i would add chorus, i expected them several times
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