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#1March 10th, 2008 · 05:37 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
18 posts
Canada
Liars
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Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 10 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2008-03


Dance!

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#2March 10th, 2008 · 12:07 PM
34 threads / 16 songs
538 posts
Mexico
Writting as i listen
I like that lo-fio filter you used, gives a nice texture to de drums...

I'm not too sure about the lead synth at :43 although the bass before that was good.

1:14... nice!

It does get a little repetitive at some point, i think adding some variation on the drums would solve the problem, maybe use again the lo-fi intro??  Oh wait, that's the outro too  

Cool song overall.
#3March 11th, 2008 · 03:40 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
18 posts
Canada
Thanks for the tips homie, it all helps!!
#4March 11th, 2008 · 01:56 PM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
It always makes me feel warm and fuzzy when a new electronica artist graces us!  And this "aint" no bubblegum either.  This is very well produced!  Everything is nice and crunchy...all the parts are melding together.  Theres a great tension throughout the song.  As far as the beat...I personally feel that the balance between repetitive and interesting is a fine one...  In dance music, I find its best to create a "safe" place for the audience to "groove" in.  Too many breakdowns or fills and it looses its "trancy" feel. Now, this obviously isn't trance, but the thought is there.  Having said that there are several minor variations that can entertain the ear and not deviate too far from the original idea, and i do recommend a breakdown or so every 8 to 16 bars, during which you can add a fill or two for variation.  After all, this is a great tune.  A tad on the "ravish" side, but thoroughly enjoyable and appreciable for whats in it.  Gratz mate, and bring us some more!   RATED AND REVIEWED! - Map
#5March 11th, 2008 · 11:16 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Well this quite nice...Some interesting layering!!A real delight to my ears...I'm no specialist in this genre,my friends above are quite versed on this but form, what I can hear this has many good thing going on...It gets a bit repetitive ,maybe a couple of wicked breaks with some pronounced and unexpected beat or snare changes(you get the idea) and then back to the theme...Good show though!
#6March 12th, 2008 · 03:19 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
18 posts
Canada
haha thanks guys!
#7March 13th, 2008 · 11:39 PM
76 threads / 5 songs
529 posts
Cook Islands
interesting piece. Love techno myself but at some parts I found it a bit annoying(repeating itself n such). Like said before change the drums up a bit.Like map said every 8 bars or 16 bars get a breakdown in there.
Like the filters,very nice.
breakdowns you did have were pretty good.
I guess all I can really nitpick is the not-variation stuff.
Great job overall!
Keep it coming :]
#8March 14th, 2008 · 11:55 AM
19 threads / 15 songs
84 posts
United States of America
Very cool! 2:13 especially nice! Overall a good rework of older ideas. Hard for these tone colors to sound fresh but well managed here. I agree with Marino regarding drum breaks, but does not detract from the piece. Looking forward to more!
#9March 14th, 2008 · 04:43 PM
9 threads / 8 songs
207 posts
United Kingdom
Im enjoying this...great vibe to this tune.  I wont repeat what the others have said, other than that I agree with MindsAtPlay's suggestion on sorting out the drums.  Little bit of fine tuning and this could develop into that little bit more.  Saying that, what you have here is sounding great!
#10March 14th, 2008 · 05:09 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Liars
gets my ear but not my attention........
great layers ....... but needs a hook???
to make wonna come back
good production
   
#11March 15th, 2008 · 10:56 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
26 posts
United States of America
love the intro and outro, wow

bouncing all over the place in my room

def  great dance music for the club

a bit repetative at points but like aetheris said a change in drums could easily solve that.
great though, big fan

you should post some more songs this one is great
#12March 16th, 2008 · 04:46 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
18 posts
Canada
haha thanks, i'm reworking it at the moment and i will post the new one when i'm finished!
#13March 17th, 2008 · 12:57 AM
6 threads / 6 songs
70 posts
United States of America
I'm not a big fan of the genre but it soudns cool.My wife listens to alot of this stuff so i know what pro tracks sound liek and it sounds really good man.It slams and has a good climaxing progression and thats cool
#14March 19th, 2008 · 11:56 PM
2 threads
7 posts
United States of America
Bro , I have never listened to this kind of music but trying to keep
an open mind.
You are the first on my playlist
I was into it. My girl Loved it.
NICE 
#15March 21st, 2008 · 07:48 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
18 posts
Canada
Thanks all! I added a breakdown into it, check it out on www.myspace.com/tokyothrowdown and tell me what you think!

PCE
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