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Dance!
Writting as i listen |
I like that lo-fio filter you used, gives a nice texture to de drums...
I'm not too sure about the lead synth at :43 although the bass before that was good.
1:14... nice!
It does get a little repetitive at some point, i think adding some variation on the drums would solve the problem, maybe use again the lo-fi intro?? Oh wait, that's the outro too
Cool song overall.
I'm not too sure about the lead synth at :43 although the bass before that was good.
1:14... nice!
It does get a little repetitive at some point, i think adding some variation on the drums would solve the problem, maybe use again the lo-fi intro?? Oh wait, that's the outro too

Cool song overall.
Thanks for the tips homie, it all helps!!
It always makes me feel warm and fuzzy when a new electronica artist graces us! And this "aint" no bubblegum either. This is very well produced! Everything is nice and crunchy...all the parts are melding together. Theres a great tension throughout the song. As far as the beat...I personally feel that the balance between repetitive and interesting is a fine one... In dance music, I find its best to create a "safe" place for the audience to "groove" in. Too many breakdowns or fills and it looses its "trancy" feel. Now, this obviously isn't trance, but the thought is there. Having said that there are several minor variations that can entertain the ear and not deviate too far from the original idea, and i do recommend a breakdown or so every 8 to 16 bars, during which you can add a fill or two for variation. After all, this is a great tune. A tad on the "ravish" side, but thoroughly enjoyable and appreciable for whats in it. Gratz mate, and bring us some more! RATED AND REVIEWED! - Map
Well this quite nice...Some interesting layering!!A real delight to my ears...I'm no specialist in this genre,my friends above are quite versed on this but form, what I can hear this has many good thing going on...It gets a bit repetitive ,maybe a couple of wicked breaks with some pronounced and unexpected beat or snare changes(you get the idea) and then back to the theme...Good show though!
interesting piece. Love techno myself but at some parts I found it a bit annoying(repeating itself n such). Like said before change the drums up a bit.Like map said every 8 bars or 16 bars get a breakdown in there.
Like the filters,very nice.
breakdowns you did have were pretty good.
I guess all I can really nitpick is the not-variation stuff.
Great job overall!
Keep it coming :]
Like the filters,very nice.
breakdowns you did have were pretty good.
I guess all I can really nitpick is the not-variation stuff.
Great job overall!
Keep it coming :]
Very cool! 2:13 especially nice! Overall a good rework of older ideas. Hard for these tone colors to sound fresh but well managed here. I agree with Marino regarding drum breaks, but does not detract from the piece. Looking forward to more!
Im enjoying this...great vibe to this tune. I wont repeat what the others have said, other than that I agree with MindsAtPlay's suggestion on sorting out the drums. Little bit of fine tuning and this could develop into that little bit more. Saying that, what you have here is sounding great!
love the intro and outro, wow
bouncing all over the place in my room
def great dance music for the club
a bit repetative at points but like aetheris said a change in drums could easily solve that.
great though, big fan
you should post some more songs this one is great
bouncing all over the place in my room
def great dance music for the club
a bit repetative at points but like aetheris said a change in drums could easily solve that.
great though, big fan
you should post some more songs this one is great

haha thanks, i'm reworking it at the moment and i will post the new one when i'm finished!
Bro , I have never listened to this kind of music but trying to keep
an open mind.
You are the first on my playlist
I was into it. My girl Loved it.
NICE
an open mind.
You are the first on my playlist
I was into it. My girl Loved it.
NICE

Thanks all! I added a breakdown into it, check it out on www.myspace.com/tokyothrowdown and tell me what you think!
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