Ok now I agree with swordfish...the chorus does need more of that reggae chop sound and feel...maybe if you just tweaked it a little. But hey if you like it like this then thats fine. In some parts it reminds me of Neil Young and possibly Johnny Cash...

This is a great recording and production overall.  All the instruments sound really good and I like the vocals a lot.  I'm a sucker-fish myself for guitar tracs and these are exceptional.  I do like the reggae chop style that the fish mentions and while the chours melody could use some work, I am still impressed.

Great job.  rated.

Rick

Nice work shinaube. Your voice goes well with your music. I like very much. I like the laid back feel to the song. Nice lyrics. the recording seems to be a little low on the volume. But this could be a computer issue. Overall I think you did well on this song. I think that the best is yet to come from you.

Flyer

will rate

This is one of my favorite songs.

Yeah the chorus kind of annoys me for the lack of skank in the rhythm, It would be nice if you had more instruments. I agree with swordfish in that you should do reggae the whole way because I just want to kill my self in all honesty when you reach the chorus.

good idea but you should go all the way on trying to do pure reggae not some pop song that only sounds like reggae

I have to disagree with some of the above posts.I like the switch of feel for the chorus I think it fits nice.really clean guitar sound.I can never get anything that clean man!!!The harmonies sound really good also.you could have done some crazier stuff with the guitar solo spot but its cool man

ew who is this fool? bahaha, just kidding Jon. Man you got soooo much better at music in general. I love the evrythign about this song dude. faint harmonies on the chorus. This song makes me want to get togehter again and do a set of our original stuff. Would could call oursleves "Crisis" but spelled the right way!! haha.I really this song. You're pretty much the best. and it wasn't my fault we failed that Metallica song on Rock Band. I was having an allergic raction..no wait better excuse, I broke my arm, but tried  tough it out so we could finish!!