Hey all, hope you like this one!

The verses are great, really catchy guitar hook and nice comfortable vocals with interesting lyrics. Chorus loses me though. None of the feel and the vocals seem a bit wobbly.

Great Raggae feel. I love the guitar tone, what equipment are you using?

Clear vocals, but I think they should be brought up just a bit.

Really cheery. Chorus doesn't really fit, but its very catchy as well.

Overall very nice. Good job.

I'm using a BOSS BR-1600, and allot of help from Home Recording For Musicians For Dummies.

Pass it to the left...

   This is pretty cool.... And even though the chorus doesn't fit, in a way because it doesn't fit, it fits well....

I like the quality and clarity of the recording...  The guitar is almost shimmering, as it comes through... whick I like...  The vocals are coming through lovely, though, perhaps not totally meshing with the tune, I am not one to talk about vocals, I am a terrible singer... But, anyway, Overall, I must say that there is emotion in the song, and although, the vocals do seem wobbly, as Wam put it, who can trust George Michael anyway.. oh I mean, no seriously, the emotion does come through in the song, which is probably the most important part of the recording process... If you don't capture that emotion, then all is lost, it's just another Britney pop sensation...

                     JimK

Its not that I don't like the chorus - I just think it doesn't quite fit the rest of the song, just my opinion. and btw WaM is an abbreviation of Waste a Moment (Fightstar) and has nothing to do with george michael! 

Sounding very pro amigo...I hear where you want to go with the chorus....I don't think the chorus is the actual issue as  more of a vocal performance issue.It sounds like your voice strains and thins out on that part loosing the grove at least as the chorus starts..I would drop the song half a step to see if it makes a better for your vocal range.Or play with either vocal doubling or modify the melody to relax your voice a bit..Anyways thats how it sounds to me...Good arrangement in general and a good show!

can i say... i think your really good at what your doing.. i like the bit where you say *look at you....* this is the chorus right?.. i think it could be a it more stronger.. cos your voice has a nice tone to it...i think its got great potential..and am rating...xxx

I think the chorus fits just fine. I love the music break. Great job, very catchy song.  Keep the song commin!

SA

pretty cool tune,nice voice for this song,this sounds like something Sublime would do.I like it,I dig it,put that in your hash pipe.

Hey... record is awesome.
Lovely bass rhythm
Pretty vox and nice composition
Go ahead with it
work with your voice a bit. music is great

The Chorus doesnt fit but I love the guitar!!! Vocals should be brought up a bit. This song is awesome!!! I wish I could record like this!

i liked it

Okay I take it back, the chorus fits fine. This is a great song!

I am total sucker for the reggae chop sound
But u drop th chop though in the 'chorus' ...............why???...... it would sound great if u just stuck with the chop
Hey do again and stay with the reggae all the way thru song....................please!!!!
the country/western chord work makes the song sound lazy
chop the whole song
kersplash

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