I wish I owned a band of choir women and they would repeat everything I said in song verse. I think my life would be more fun, and I would enjoy small talk all the time.

Okay.

Have you thought about hiring a drummer? Cause that would make a world of difference - your rhythm is all over the place. And maybe write some lyrics and sing something...? This isn't a song yet, that's all. It's just kind of a ho-hum collection of not-so-interesting and even less rhythmic chords.

Here's the test: try dancing to it. honestly.