I wrote this watching a friend of mine change his life for his girl.


The moments that we have shared
They give a meaning to life
Changed who i am 
All for you

Chorus:
Every step I've ever taken
Every drink I've ever drunken
Every moment ever wasted
It was all because of you

All of my lies
Made to protect you
They passed you by
They were all pointless words

Chorus

All the money ever wasted
Every life I had taken 
Every breath of air stolen
It was all done for you
Because of you

Chorus

END

this sounds nice Pat....I like the 12 string acoustic    would be nice to see the lyrics posted also

Good work...your improving alot...keep it going

Flyer

will rate

I like it. The guitar was good, but it kinda drowned out the vocals. The vocals sounded pretty good but for 60% of the song I couldn't make out what the lyrics were. Maybe tone done the guitar if possible. With that fixed I would add it to my playlist in a second! Keep up the great work.

-Mark

Very nice! I see you got your privilages back!  Keep this stuff up man!  Little production work and this is a SONG!

I like the guitar playing ..you give me a kinda childhood memory one which i like thankyou. this is a really touching peice.would be good to hear your voice a bit more.very good. rating.x

very nice guitar build at start
vocs a bit low in the mix...........one mic???? one take????
yep the vocs are screwed/flattened
voc needs lifting out of mid guitar sound .............defining
possible EQ mixing needed here and a bit of stereo spread....panning might do the trick
lovely song thanx
ker splash

the fish

Nice job!
love the organic feel.Sounds very woodside like.Nice melody and chord progression.I would work on the Recording quality!Still,you seemed to have been in the Zone!!!

the vox need to be sung more clearly, to define the lyrics. the recording qulity is not the best, but that depends on what kind of gear you got, (it isnt always possible for every songwriter to have pro gear). but the song itself is very nice. keep at it.

Ian

good guitar.
but sing loud and sing proud!
who cares fi you don't sing well or if you do,be glad of your voice!
I like the lyrics man.
Great job! Just as said before some recording stuff and it will be pretty good man.

Again... vocals a-little buried.  The 12-string seems a-little to thick for this song.  I get the feeling this song would sound excellent with a piano line.  Can you play piano or transmute it to piano and give it a try?  I think that would give it a special identity.

Stupid Steven That's it.  It rocks Pat     

The guitar sounds a little bit thin but the song is great as it is! Your voice has a wonderful colour - make it louder in the mix!

I like it!
Keep the little laugh in there it fits.
The vocals just need to be defined.
great song man!

Well, isn't that a story we all know too well! Good tune!

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