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#1June 13th, 2005 · 09:16 AM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
When Will She Learn?
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This song is not in a battle


This is the second song I've ever wrote/recorded. Maybe I shoulda changed the title to 'When Will She Learn To Make Her Sleazy Boyfriend Wear A Condom'

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#2June 16th, 2005 · 03:48 AM
25 threads / 23 songs
127 posts
United States of America
very nice
Now I dig this, awesome drum loop, now this is what I like!
#3June 16th, 2005 · 10:03 AM
115 threads / 18 songs
1,414 posts
United States of America
as with your other songs, i stick to the decision that you have a great sense of melody.  that's what kills a lot of people when it comes to writing the vocals.  you do it very nicely.  i also like the reversed drum sounds here and there.  it's a nice touch that you didn't over-kill nice!
#4June 16th, 2005 · 01:05 PM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
oooh everyones so nice to me    thankies
#5June 17th, 2005 · 11:06 AM
I love your works, but with this one my mind is having a difficult time syncing the guitar and drums. As always, the vocals are amazing. In-fact, sometimes the vocals tie together the drums and guitar, making them sound good when they ordinarily wouldn't. That's called style. Hold onto it, not many people can do that.

Who is your voice teacher? I'd like to fall in love with him.
#6June 18th, 2005 · 09:41 AM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
Wow! thankyou! I dont have a voice teacher though...well I did have about 3 lessons once but it was a woman and she freaked me out so i quit lol
#7June 18th, 2005 · 02:28 PM
1 posts
Spain
wow.
Excellent.
#8July 25th, 2005 · 12:48 AM
18 threads / 15 songs
147 posts
Italy
Good song, maybe the guitar riff's a bit out-of-time on its attack. Again, your voice is bad recorded and it's a pity. I believe you just need a good pre-amp but I still don't understand why the quality in some of your songs is alternated to moments of absolute fm noise.
Anyway I liked this one a lot.
#9August 1st, 2005 · 10:19 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
15 posts
Romania
Great voice! I like your songs. You are so close - one little step - a good manager and a good musical teacher - to be a professional singer! I'm sure that one day you will be a new musical star. Good luck!
#10August 1st, 2005 · 10:25 PM
31 threads / 1 songs
434 posts
United States of America
have to say i didn't like this one as much as a lot of your other songs... not sure why...

just being dead honest here... i'm sure that with some work it'll be better
#11August 5th, 2005 · 10:58 AM
You've Ruined Me for All Others
Since I stumbled across you, I've been unable to try any other posted songs. I just adore your voice. You have a definite style. Personality is what makes stars - and that you have! Keep 'em coming!
#12September 4th, 2005 · 06:15 PM
4 threads / 3 songs
34 posts
United States of America
The drum riff here sounds great... like it is an odd time song... like 7/8 but I had to count it out and lo and behold.... it isn't... which you probably already knew, but I like that effect.  I don;t know who did you drumming, but he/she has a really great internal clock... Anyhoo, liked the song, not as much as some of your others.  I think it is just the song itself.  Nothing to do with your singing or anything, just the song.
#13September 5th, 2005 · 05:04 AM
11 posts
United Kingdom
very sweet voice im going to check your other six songs
#14September 6th, 2005 · 09:12 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
19 posts
United States of America
will she learn
I like the drums  and I like your voice  
#15September 16th, 2005 · 03:05 PM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,079 posts
Netherlands
It's sad the vocals aren't recorded/processed properly, but about halfway the song it doesn't matter anymore: it sounds like a deliberate effect.

The drums are the best in this song. The reverse effect is really great!

I applaud.
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