This is the second song I've ever wrote/recorded. Maybe I shoulda changed the title to 'When Will She Learn To Make Her Sleazy Boyfriend Wear A Condom'

Now I dig this, awesome drum loop, now this is what I like!

as with your other songs, i stick to the decision that you have a great sense of melody.  that's what kills a lot of people when it comes to writing the vocals.  you do it very nicely.  i also like the reversed drum sounds here and there.  it's a nice touch that you didn't over-kill nice!

oooh everyones so nice to me    thankies

I love your works, but with this one my mind is having a difficult time syncing the guitar and drums. As always, the vocals are amazing. In-fact, sometimes the vocals tie together the drums and guitar, making them sound good when they ordinarily wouldn't. That's called style. Hold onto it, not many people can do that.

Who is your voice teacher? I'd like to fall in love with him.

Wow! thankyou! I dont have a voice teacher though...well I did have about 3 lessons once but it was a woman and she freaked me out so i quit lol

Excellent.

Good song, maybe the guitar riff's a bit out-of-time on its attack. Again, your voice is bad recorded and it's a pity. I believe you just need a good pre-amp but I still don't understand why the quality in some of your songs is alternated to moments of absolute fm noise.
Anyway I liked this one a lot.

Great voice! I like your songs. You are so close - one little step - a good manager and a good musical teacher - to be a professional singer! I'm sure that one day you will be a new musical star. Good luck!

have to say i didn't like this one as much as a lot of your other songs... not sure why...

just being dead honest here... i'm sure that with some work it'll be better

Since I stumbled across you, I've been unable to try any other posted songs. I just adore your voice. You have a definite style. Personality is what makes stars - and that you have! Keep 'em coming!

The drum riff here sounds great... like it is an odd time song... like 7/8 but I had to count it out and lo and behold.... it isn't... which you probably already knew, but I like that effect.  I don;t know who did you drumming, but he/she has a really great internal clock... Anyhoo, liked the song, not as much as some of your others.  I think it is just the song itself.  Nothing to do with your singing or anything, just the song.

very sweet voice im going to check your other six songs

I like the drums  and I like your voice  

It's sad the vocals aren't recorded/processed properly, but about halfway the song it doesn't matter anymore: it sounds like a deliberate effect.

The drums are the best in this song. The reverse effect is really great!

I applaud.