#1December 1st, 2007 · 11:47 AM
51 threads / 31 songs
114 posts
United States of America
The Challenger of Salinger
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Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 8 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2007-12


I don't have anything to say.

http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/53726.html

This is in the battle

Hey little boy, would you like to see what's in my pocket or not?

Thanks for all the nice reviews. I'm not a singer but I've been working on it. It's much better than the other singing song I have on this site.

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#2December 2nd, 2007 · 07:13 AM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Very chill jam like.Reminds me a bit of Phish.I think this is great.The production and sound recording are very good.That uhhh vocal part is nice!!!
Great job with vocal layers indeed.Nice piano.Tight groove!
#3December 3rd, 2007 · 05:01 AM
5 threads / 2 songs
51 posts
India
hmm...
nice rythm..
is indeed great..
reminds me of the lod school of music..

great vocals..
and the effects and all rock..

continue your work..
looking forward to hear more of you!!
#4December 10th, 2007 · 11:56 AM
20 threads / 18 songs
159 posts
United States of America
You sing like Lou Reed kind of. Pretty good!
#5December 12th, 2007 · 01:12 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
This is a great song. The instruments flow well together, the transitions are nice. I particularly like the chorus the most, that was the best part, I think. The main vocals could use some work, I think. To me it sounds like you're more talking than singing, and that's effected the pitch in a couple of places. I think it'd be great if you could keep that sort of tone and still have the pitch (it's only a couple of places mind you, I'm trying not to sound too harsh, as this is the only thing I noticed to critique). Overall, this is a nice, smooth song. And I'll give you a nice score for it.

Good job.

WB
#6December 21st, 2007 · 11:51 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
3 posts
United States of America
cool track man
reminds me of a lot of indie tracks that are being played at the moment... love the talking type of singing
#7December 27th, 2007 · 02:59 PM
13 threads / 12 songs
38 posts
United States of America
chords
I still don't like those chords I wrote but it's alright
#8December 27th, 2007 · 03:13 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
I wish I were involved in these new clandestine recordings with Chris
#9December 27th, 2007 · 03:45 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
327 posts
United Kingdom
this has a good flow to it,it will certianly stay in my head.I think its catchy,you know how to make a song for sure..will rate...like this a lot...x
#10December 27th, 2007 · 09:34 PM
157 threads / 11 songs
2,294 posts
United Kingdom
re: The Challenger of Salinger
Very...........VELVET UNDERGROUND SOUNDING........................
NICE!!!!
HEY BABE..............
Come back to this one....................... I loVE it!!!!
thanx for pleasant song
Super vote for battle

the fish
#11December 28th, 2007 · 11:26 AM
51 threads / 31 songs
114 posts
United States of America
uh... thanks for all of your support.

It's weird because I've never heard the velvet underground before but even Chris said I sounded like Lou reed. I can't tell how I'm doing in the battle: it says I don't have any votes and won't compute my average.  So I don't know what's going on.

It's true, in the awesome captian beefheart/sun ra fashion I sung the words and made my brother (plug5) write the chords.  He didn't have any involvement after that though. But a special shout out to him then.

later
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