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#16November 16th, 2007 · 12:19 PM
8 posts
United States of America
I liked it
I liked it, it was good i want some more
#17November 16th, 2007 · 12:31 PM
9 threads / 8 songs
207 posts
United Kingdom
I love your lyrics - really nice style.  Recording quality is pretty good too.  Only criticism would be of a the fairly generic chord progression, but you do mix it up with different strumming patterns which is good.  I was about ot suggest maybe adding some other parts to it, but on second thought I think that a major strength and contributing factor to the feel of this song is its simplicity.  So - keep it as it is!

Kobeshi
#18November 20th, 2007 · 11:39 AM
15 threads / 15 songs
106 posts
United States of America
No drums required. its good song which I'm sure the ladies would enjoy you playing it to them live. lol. Keep it up.
#19November 25th, 2007 · 03:56 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
47 posts
Germany
An excellent composition and recording.  The lyrics really speak to me.  Like it that the imaginary roses may be discarded, says that something lives even if not in the real world.  Yes, a good hook.  Your guitar is very clean and is perfect accompaniment.  Like others have mentioned, additional instruments should be minimal as the tune stands very well on its own.  Great job -- I voted.
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