Everyone please vote Thanks

Lyrics:

I'm waiting here in the park
And I'll stand in this place 'till it gets dark
You told me to meet you here
Here I'll wait for you
Here I'll wait for you

(chorus)
I'm sitting here with imaginary roses
I hope I don't have to dispose of them tonight
Lamenting everything I've done wrong
I don't want to go
I don't want to leave alone

I'm laying here gazing at the stars
I don't know where you are but
I just want to remind you...

(chorus)

I'm standing here too cold to speak
With stars the only ones who'd listen
I'll save it up for you
I'll save it up for you

(chorus) [2x]

your really improving Zach...Im actually going to add this to my playlist buddy...nice...your getting more confidence in your vocals....guitar sounds nice  and your writing is really good man

Flyer

Will Rate

Awesome!

Nice writing style man!

 This is really good.  I think you nailed it man! Damn good! Ill vote...

good job man. are you playing and singing simultanously in this?
 very good song writing, and the recording qualitys pretty damn good too.

keep it up

Ian

i overdubbed

aww hunny this is luvly
ive lisened to it like 5 times in a row!
i think i will become ur first fan gorl
*squeels, screems, faints*
there now that the shabangs done
this is awsome, i luv your vocals in this one, your makeing me proud kid
i really really really luv the chorus

opps forgot to vote lol

very nice... I love the line standing hear with imaginary roses.  good  hook line...  this is a good song.. has nice tempo and feel ... recording quality is decent..  nicely done gets high vote..
greg

Well.... 

 
      I have to say........

  
                And dont take this the wrong way.......


                         I just feel.......  You know.....................umm.....

 
                                        Obligated..........I mean..........If I dont..........



                                                         I'll feel bad for not doing it....................

                                  

                                                                     SO I must say the truth.........................

                                                       

                                                        Call it Constructive Criticism

 

                                         SO, I'll just spit it out................


 
                           Ok..... Here Goes...........

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...................................I LOVE IT!...  It is pretty cool man... I agree the line of standing here with Imaginary Roses is a pretty good hook.....  Also, the guitar does sound good....well done..... Bravo..... Wooooo HOOOOOooooo

             JimK

Haha, thanks Jim.

Should I add drums? I'm going to add some electric riffs over the top, but I'm unsure about drums...

This one is really good Zach!

The vocals match the guitar and the overall feeling of the song perfectly; nothing wrong with the vocal delivery here at all.  The timing is absolutely fine too.

As far as other instrumentation is concerned... I think it would spoil the song.  Ok, you could fit in some percussion perhaps, but I don't think anything else would add to the song, more likely it would detract from it.

Good work on this.

Everybody vote plz:)

I'm liking it Zach...I don't think you should add drums, it's nice as a simple song.  Maybe I'd like to hear a little more angst in your voice...not the whole song...just in a couple of spots maybe to add some emphasis. I'll vote!