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#1September 11th, 2007 · 09:20 PM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
The Park
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Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 13 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2007-11


Everyone please vote Thanks

Lyrics:

I'm waiting here in the park
And I'll stand in this place 'till it gets dark
You told me to meet you here
Here I'll wait for you
Here I'll wait for you

(chorus)
I'm sitting here with imaginary roses
I hope I don't have to dispose of them tonight
Lamenting everything I've done wrong
I don't want to go
I don't want to leave alone

I'm laying here gazing at the stars
I don't know where you are but
I just want to remind you...

(chorus)

I'm standing here too cold to speak
With stars the only ones who'd listen
I'll save it up for you
I'll save it up for you

(chorus) [2x]

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#2September 11th, 2007 · 09:23 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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your really improving Zach...Im actually going to add this to my playlist buddy...nice...your getting more confidence in your vocals....guitar sounds nice  and your writing is really good man

Flyer

Will Rate
#3September 11th, 2007 · 09:26 PM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Awesome!
#4September 11th, 2007 · 09:28 PM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
Nice writing style man!

 This is really good.  I think you nailed it man! Damn good! Ill vote...
#5September 13th, 2007 · 06:37 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
good job man. are you playing and singing simultanously in this?
 very good song writing, and the recording qualitys pretty damn good too.

keep it up

Ian
#6September 13th, 2007 · 09:06 PM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
i overdubbed
#7September 13th, 2007 · 10:42 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
aww hunny this is luvly
ive lisened to it like 5 times in a row!
i think i will become ur first fan gorl
*squeels, screems, faints*
there now that the shabangs done
this is awsome, i luv your vocals in this one, your makeing me proud kid
i really really really luv the chorus
#8September 13th, 2007 · 10:43 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
opps forgot to vote lol
#9September 14th, 2007 · 12:46 AM
17 threads / 3 songs
185 posts
United States of America
very nice... I love the line standing hear with imaginary roses.  good  hook line...  this is a good song.. has nice tempo and feel ... recording quality is decent..  nicely done gets high vote..
greg
#10September 21st, 2007 · 11:38 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
hmmmm
Well.... 

 
      I have to say........

  
                And dont take this the wrong way.......


                         I just feel.......  You know.....................umm.....

 
                                        Obligated..........I mean..........If I dont..........



                                                         I'll feel bad for not doing it....................

                                  

                                                                     SO I must say the truth.........................

                                                       

                                                        Call it Constructive Criticism

 

                                         SO, I'll just spit it out................


 
                           Ok..... Here Goes...........

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...................................I LOVE IT!...  It is pretty cool man... I agree the line of standing here with Imaginary Roses is a pretty good hook.....  Also, the guitar does sound good....well done..... Bravo..... Wooooo HOOOOOooooo

             JimK
#11September 30th, 2007 · 07:39 PM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Haha, thanks Jim.
#12November 1st, 2007 · 04:58 PM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Should I add drums? I'm going to add some electric riffs over the top, but I'm unsure about drums...
#13November 2nd, 2007 · 08:49 AM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
This one is really good Zach!

The vocals match the guitar and the overall feeling of the song perfectly; nothing wrong with the vocal delivery here at all.  The timing is absolutely fine too.

As far as other instrumentation is concerned... I think it would spoil the song.  Ok, you could fit in some percussion perhaps, but I don't think anything else would add to the song, more likely it would detract from it.

Good work on this.
#14November 2nd, 2007 · 02:55 PM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Everybody vote plz:)
#15November 2nd, 2007 · 04:49 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
I'm liking it Zach...I don't think you should add drums, it's nice as a simple song.  Maybe I'd like to hear a little more angst in your voice...not the whole song...just in a couple of spots maybe to add some emphasis. I'll vote!
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