Hmmm.

Wasn't sure if I liked this at first, but now that I've listened to it a few times I actually really like it!

I enjoyed making this one a lot so please comment it and tell me what you think!

If you don't like it very much, come back a bit later and listen to it again. If you still don't like it do the same again. If you still don't like if after that, then you're probably not ever going to like it very much. But it's one of those songs that gets better the more you listen to it.

Well it was for me anyway

bass, drum track maybe rhythm guitar riff..

not sure which it needs most..   what you have
here just needs polish... that's about it... 
 you can at least tell you got into doing this
track.. tha's very important.. very kewl when
it actually does show up...

Oh kewl, I just realized I got to deflower yet
another new song by being first to rate & review
it! (lol)


blessings,

Blue

Thanks, I'll see what I can do with the instrumentation.

If anyone's interested in doing the drums part then message me.

I will see what I can do....

            JimK

Quite short - surprised me when it suddenly ended so maybe consider lengthening it out a bit.  Other than that i'd pretty much just have to ditto blue eyes on his comment.  Tho I do enjoy the simplicity of some songs sometimes (James Blunts "Goodbye My Lover" springs to mind). 

Oh, and i''d be happy to look at doing a drum track for it if Jim doesnt get to it first :P

I like the song but I.m not sure about the tan tan tan tan.....
The cut and paste of the vox takes away from the the quality.Still a good idea for a good song!

Thanks for the comments, v2 is up:

http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5259.html

The simple and elegant background really makes this song a light hearted and easy listening track.

I really liked it and wished it was longer, perhaps a change of pace for the chorus.

And of course, the pre-mentioned vocals were a little distracting, but I can see what the value of it all will add up to be.

What are you recording with? Mic wise?