The revised version

old one: http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5045.html

good voices. good backing music. mixing is great. bit long in the ending

Listening as I type...
Good intro, I like the vox.
The guitar wah guitar loop is effective.
Lovely use of vocals.
The mix is about spot on.
Instrumental blending (what the choice of instrument sounds) is good and makes for a very pleasant overall sound.
Violin solo is great... reminds me of Caravan (mid 70s British band)

Overall another very decent song from the Takman!

excellent professional  mix and use of samples , the funky goove very nice .
you are such a wonderful musician and composer taka san your future is shining top scores

Well, read the post I made in the first version but add this:
OMG, that violin solo is awesome! Rock rock rock! Marvelous.
It's sad the download option is not working!

         > Iszil

Listening...

Issues mentioned on V1: all solved, specially the violin, that's exactly what i tried to say on my comment.

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I love this, great feel, voices are superb super mix.

The only thing I would change is to have a bit more attack in the Bass drum.

Voted.

Denis

Thanks folks, means a lot

Denis - Ah, interesting that you commented on the bass drum. I actually had a pretty kicking kick on my first draft, but I ended up taking it out, because I have this sort of a test run process that I go through with after recording where I go around playing it in my headphones, in the car, in the home stereo, etc... anyhow, in the home stereo system, it was blasting terrifically, and it sort of seemed to overpower the rest of the song, getting away from that laid back feel. So I turned it down quite a bit. But now, I guess maybe I should have just gone with my first impression. Anyway, thanks.

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moo
i found this while liseing to your song..
thought it was kinda neet, the tittle being bird cage and all of both things
so here you go

Love the key sample arrangement in after 1:30 the wah guitar is a definite hook,and the violin fits perfect on this mix.
Top ratings!!love the drum fill in about 3:47....
More please!

Nice.. I really like the Violin...Nice work  Ben

Flyer

As I Hear
Fabulous steal of romanian singers!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great slicing
this is great.........
the mix aint quite right but man the concept!!!!!!

u play violin???

 

great concept

splastishous

the fish

as usual,good stuff,i think your work is amazing.xxxxx