I agree with Joker about the piano sounding like Porcelain, but I got Coldplay vibes at the begining.
Agree with the problems mentioned about vocals too.
If you have a crap microphone like me, try not to sing too close to it and also add a bit of reverb.
The overall feel of the song is nice though. 

This is an old song which woz done with my crappy mic but i might rerecord the vocals. I don't think I can be bothered to learn to play the piano part but I might have a go at changing the volume levels and stuff

ok as everyone said. you have great potentialities, work on them. take care,

mke

this song is really nice on the ears...

this song is really nice on the ears...

this song is really nice on the ears...

tha song is a good one..I like the flow to it...nice piano...your vocals arent that bad...just need some work on that part...but,I'm sure you'll improve  your vocals...good work here..I like the song..

Ralph

aside from the vox... this is very nice.

also, it would be much nicer with more realistic sounding instruments.

the song itself is very nice. to me it sounds very... coldplay-esque..

good backing vox.

Sweet!

Sweet