I love the lyrics!  Very western!  Ralph, you've got some unique vocals man! Almost like story teller ish.  Very nice!  Avi, Awesome bro!  Very classy! Gets a vote!

Thanks so much for the comment Tom...I try to just sing in my own skin ..If you know what I mean...I don't try to or want to sound like anyone else.....Thanks Again Tom

Yeah  AVI  is awesome   huh Tom  ????    ..I hope to do more work with him


Flyer

Hi Flyer
Story Song ........... I hear it and I love it
hey vocals right in the face............just where they should be

just a slight clipping i think in the voc in the strong part.......... so what

great guitars
hey double trackin
harmony next?

ker sploosh

i vote well hot

*a bit of tecky stuff ................... if u have access to a noise gate on the mic that would be useful as u can hear the vocal track 'come live' and hiss a bit in the quiet bits

Yeah  Fish  your right about the hiss in the Mic...its been heard on the other songs   I dont know what to do about it
I might just get a new mic
Thanks for the comment  and for the Vote Fish

KER-SPLASHHHHHHHHHH

Flyer

I scored high on this one.. had a nice wordy
review of it too.. that's when my I.P. went
down and it didn't get saved.. I sent it right
as my internet provider decided it was just
gonna lock everything up... oh well..
 I said this..
  I think this is so kewl.. the lyrics express
your thought very well..  and I like the
over all song just like it is..  personally it
is in my humble opinion that I would leave
Ralph's narrative parts alone.. exactly like
they are, cause the full effect of them are
superb!! I would then take Ralph and Avi,
add two more singers and let that be the
line up for all the backup vocal movements
I hear, and then have Avi sing all of the
lead melody - story lines.. He can control
his voice and his range is made for this
lick.. his ability to hold a note for so damn
long also makes it tailored for all of the
parts that need strength and sustain to really
add the needed impact to really put this
in a class of ready for publication on the
spot type tunes!!
 I really like this song and think it is
already ready to demo and sell to someone
else.... but with the changes I mentioned,
it could in fact be ready for the lineup I
named to be able to take it right to air play..


bluey

Danny Boy...Thanks so much for the damn nice comment...I was talking to Avi about putting this song to a CD as a matter of fact...I'm going to have it mastered at the studio...and send that copy to Avi and see what we have...I'm glad you think so highly of this song..and I'm sure Avi feels the same...Thank you Danny Boy...Cant wait till I get to your place to get the studio going man...I'm sure you and I can cut some nice tunes bro....I'm looking forward to it...prob around October...hows that sound ?

Flyer

we'll see what we can come up with putting
our heads together!!


bluey

yepper   Danny Boy...I'm looking forward to it

Flyer

Thanks Ampers .......for The High Rating

Flyer

I love the lead guitar throught the song, very Santana like! The smooth vocals really create an atmosphere to the story, great work!

ohhhhh i think your voice is really gorgeous flyer....this is very deep... i love it... you pair..great collab! i think this is down right brill!!!!! you have sooo much to give flyer..ok i am saying this song is top notch...well done you pair..xxxxx

Thanks Pagans...
How have you been.....?


Avinashv gave me a real good composition to work with...

Flyer

am doing good..keep looking for you ..lol..its a great song and you pair are amazing..keep on bringing those songs on for us flyer..xxxxxxxxx

Just saw this guy won a battle! Thanks to everyone who voted for us.  Flyer, great working with ya man.

lol Avi...Took you a lil bit of time to see that  huh...lol...nice working with you also man....I couldnt have asked for a nicer composition to work with ....just  FANTASTIC   BRO..

Thank you also shinaube


Pagans..Im working on the Christmas song..its coming along...Ill let you know

Ralphie