I write while I listen...yes i think the lead guitar is a bit on your face
I like the drums' sound
actually there's a lot of improvement in you from previuos stuff I heard
I'd like to hear you sing though
Cheers

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Classic sounding rock.  Guitar sounds decent.  Effects bring it back about half way through and at the end.  A little repetitive.  Good luck.  Mark

I like your experimental style, I really like how u change sounds, so it's not boring....I feel a lot of creativity here, good job...Well, all I can say actualy is that I really enjoyed listening to this....I always try to give some kind of advice but hard to do it here...maybe...timing is sometimes a bit of, try to pay atention on that, also like someone mentioned here, do you plug guitar directly to your computer? If so, guitar is low input device so u need preamp or something to get firm sound...well, I don't want to go into that details cause I dont know what equipment you have...anyway, very nice, I like it, keep rockin'!

Spoon

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