Instrumental rock piece..

Please comment!!!

Dude, what is your recording chain?
There are some problems with that guitar sound. Solo guitar is fine at moments, but backing guitar sounds like there's no guitar cab (or cab sim for that matter) at all.

The piece has quite nice ideas, but those can't be actually heard Another suggestion of mine, if you want, is that you have to work on the piece structure a bit, i.e. bridges between different parts and following the chord progressions. The bridges, however, are important part of the overall piece structure, else all is going to sound as un-related riffs.
It's fine to have few odd notes/chords here and there, though. Don't let the scales put you in frames
Having a bass guitar/synth behind will improve the groove, as well.

Keep on workin' and keep them coming! !

Thank you for comments. 
I will see what I can do to improve it.

Oooooops, Kine. Excuse my ignorance and utter stupidity, regarding:
"Dude, what is your recording chain?", especially the "dude" part of it. I didn't notice :-/ Too early in the morning, not enough caffeine and 'fingaz' way faster than brain...

Move on the ideas and keep them coming.

Hey Dude! I just LOVE your sounds! 
The different effects on the lead and that lovely rocky rhythm. Real good!
What keeps on blowing me away every time is how much you've grown!   Musically!
Don't mean to sound like some granny in a shop! lol
You've recorded and put all of this together so well.
The lead is a bit on the hard side, but then its a rock instrumental!

Thanks kings. Yeah, I grow every day, don't I! 

Synchu: It's ok, I guess it's 'cause I play like a dude! 

I like the lead guitar a lot, it speaks with passion and identity. nice rhythm, altough personally I like to hear real drums, but there again it may be difficult for you to arrange this. nice job. Perhaps we should call you DUDESS.

Denis

DUDESS.
What keeps on blowing me away every time is how much you've grown!   Musically!
I agree with King you are growing stupendosly as a musician and you're very creative.
Kuddos!

This is cool. Cleaned up a bit it would kick even more ass than it does now. Kind of Metallica-esqu in sound, very very cool.
I dig it.

Yeah, rock.

Cheers

WB

thank y'all!! 

did you record this yourself? How'd you get those guitars to pan back in forth on one track?

yeah, I recorded it myself.    I don't know what I did, I just recorded it.. like I always do.. Thanx for comment! 

don't listen to anything these people have told you. Don't clean it up, don't worry about bridges. This is perfect the way it is! I love it! I'd like to see you win the battle with this.

hehe.. wow. thank you!