Vox needed.
Written on FL.
Lyrics- http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/44126.html

I can feel my heart beating,
I can see your soul depart,
I can feel my skin freezing,
I can see you losing your heart,
I can fight my way out of the crowd,
I can synchronize both of my lungs,
As you lay there sweating your head off,
As you lay there speaking in tongues,

I know I can't die,
The storm keeps me alive,
Throughout the night,
But not without a fight,
You cannot win,
Your life becomes a sin,
Your life becomes a sin,

You can see the light in the tunnel,
You can see the light up ahead,
You can breathe air colder than winter,
You can drown in the storm in your head,
I can feel my heart beating,
I can see your soul depart,
I can feel my skin freezing,
I can see you losing your heart,

I know I can't die,
I'm pain and suicide,
You choke inside,
Now take the cyanide,
Can't ease the wound,
The hole inside the room,
This time you're gone,
Leaving us in the room,

I can see the thunder is coming,
I can see the rain fall on your face,
I can whisper a line from a poem,
You can follow the hollow disgrace,
I can feel my heart beating,
I can see the rain fall on your face,
I can feel my skin freezing,
You can follow the hollow disgrace,

(Solo break)

I know I can't die,
The storm keeps me alive,
Throughout the night,
But not without a fight,
You cannot win,
Your life becomes a sin,
Your life becomes a sin,

Nothing to cherish but you,
Now you are gone,
Nothing will blossom from you,
You would have done,
Nothing to cherish but you,
Now you are gone,
Nothing will perish from you,
You would have gone.

I know I can't die,
Now you are gone,
You cannot win,
You would have done,
I cannot die,
Now you are gone,
You cannot win,
You would have done.

Enjoy.

I always loved bursting a cherry...  excellent composition...
wonder how it would sound on a full length concert grand??
keep up the good work bro!!!


Blessings,

Dan - Blue

like your other songs, it has a very catchy melody and as blue said it is a nice composition, it could use another instrument like a big double bass or something in the final. Are there any collabs in the pipeline cos id love to hear the finished versions.

Ian