Thought I'd put this one up on the site.  It's a collaboration between Wisdom and myself, that was recorded some time last year.

The vocals have been re-recorded from the original song that Wisdom put up, and so this has ended up being a fairly different mix to his version.

For those interested:
Wisdom wrote and recorded all the instrumental parts (and put it up as a "teaser" for others to add lyrics to).  All power to him for a great bit of music.
I wrote the lyrics, and did all the vocals.

But it's really Wisdom's song.
Hope you like my version of it


Edit:  Lyrics posted here - http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/32591.html

Good Song, Great Composition.. keep up the good work laddy....
ya really have something.. work it!!  just a little more practice,
until you have it so tight a phart couldn't escape..  oops, that's
right, I piffle..  so prim and proper!


Blessings,

Danny - Blueyes

Danny,
Cheers..... "sloppy" vocals noted

I heard the 1st version some time ago..thought it was nice as well
Jim, You did a nice job on writing the lyrics and  putting them to vocals
Bob.. Nice work on the instrumentation
good mix also

Will Rate

Flyer

Very nice song. Instrumental, vocals. Entertaining "teaser" plotline for the lyrics.
Will also leave a nice vote. The lyrics/vocals/instruments/mix comes together well.

Cheers

WB

yeah, i like it. everything stands well in the mix and the vox fits in nicely. a good vote from me.

Ian

I must say I was so surprised when Jim first send me a demo with his vocals

Instead of a little demo it turned out into a nice song. I'm very thankfull!!
Jim's lyrics and vocals really rock!

Greetings!
Wisdom

I didn't think I'd like this when I first started to listen...
BUT! I actually really do! The lyrics suit your voice, if that makes sense. Not like me, when I try and swear  The chorus is great, I love the harmonies!
'Her smile says yes, but her body says no.'
Thats such a brilliant line!

heyyyy reggae time

good thing and catchy chorus

vocal record is bit too front but amazing.