#1April 9th, 2007 · 11:51 PM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Processional
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Also known as: "Nothing Without You"
Need vocalist!
Lyrics linked here: http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/45276.html
Posted below also:

Processional
Take my heart, to show I'm human,
And seize my lungs, let me blow you away,
Grab my soul in your hands, grind it to dust,
My vocals are yours to  keep, in God we trust,

I am nothing without you,
I take what's mine to keep from feeling blue,
I etch these words in my head, I'll never forget,
I am nothing without you,

Blood, violence, screaming in silence,
A God in the hand is worth two in assylums,
Love, hate, relationships fail,
The crime in  the city is life without bail,
Guns kill, people murder,
Pulling the trigger, pushing you further,
Live, die, merry go round,
Seasons are bitterly pushed to the ground,

I am nothing without you,
I take what's mine to keep from feeling blue,
I etch these words in my head, I'll never forget,
I am nothing without you,

Take my heart, to show I'm human,
And seize my lungs, let me blow you away,
Grab my soul in your hands, grind it to dust,
My vocals are yours to  keep, in God we trust,

I am nothing without you,
I take what's mine to keep from feeling blue,
I etch these words in my head, I'll never forget,
I am nothing without you,

I am nothing without you,
I am nothing without you,

Ends with "I am nothing without you" overlapping with the offbeat one being pitched with more of a climax.

Feel free to check out any of the other songs I've posted in the last week or so, and I'm really keen for finding a vocalist.
Still got a fair few more to come...

Cheers

WB

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#2April 9th, 2007 · 11:58 PM
61 threads / 3 songs
858 posts
United States
The sounds are getting richer.  Yeah man, keep demanding the best.  Dont even know if it needs vocals its so nice. Good ratings for this one....
#3April 10th, 2007 · 12:09 AM
11 threads / 5 songs
55 posts
United States
OO FIRST TO REPLY I can do vocals if I like it
#4April 10th, 2007 · 12:16 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Thanks man.
I kind of felt this one,as I originally had it, was really repetitive without lyrics, just being the loop around 4 chords, but I had 4 different versions of the same pattern, and layered synth in the background, pushed the main synth to the front, I'm glad I mixed it up enough for ya.

I added a little instrumental break for the piano (momentarily switching to 5/8 time    ), which broke it up a bit, but also made it a lot longer (without it the chorus would have lead straight into the outro).

Cheers

WB
#5April 10th, 2007 · 12:23 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Danzidell
Sure man, be my guest.
Except, I didn't reply until now because I only saw the first post, minds' 
But still quite quick, it was only up for 15-20 mins...

Cheers
#6April 10th, 2007 · 12:32 AM
11 threads / 5 songs
55 posts
United States
Yea--I was beaten...
#7April 10th, 2007 · 12:41 AM
34 threads / 16 songs
570 posts
United States
good meter..
excellent composition!!  you continue to hold my respect always bro!


blessings,

Dan - Blue
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