#1February 22nd, 2007 · 07:04 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Processional (nothing without you)
This is the result of a basic chord structure, simple 3/4 plucking technique, and a moody half hour. The first line in the third paragraph came from a small spoken part intended for another lyric/song I haven't posted (due to refinement issues) although this hasn't been reworked yet. Written today. Enjoy, if you dare 

Light a candle and sway from side to side.

Processional
Take my heart, to show I'm human,
And seize my lungs, let me blow you away,
Grab my soul in your hands, grind it to dust,
My vocals are yours to  keep, in God we trust,

I am nothing without you,
I take what's mine to keep from feeling blue,
I etch these words in my head, I'll never forget,
I am nothing without you,

Blood, violence, screaming in silence,
A God in the hand is worth two in assylums,
Love, hate, relationships fail,
The crime in  the city is life without bail,
Guns kill, people murder,
Pulling the trigger, pushing you further,
Live, die, merry go round,
Seasons are bitterly pushed to the ground,

I am nothing without you,
I take what's mine to keep from feeling blue,
I etch these words in my head, I'll never forget,
I am nothing without you,

Take my heart, to show I'm human,
And seize my lungs, let me blow you away,
Grab my soul in your hands, grind it to dust,
My vocals are yours to  keep, in God we trust,

I am nothing without you,
I take what's mine to keep from feeling blue,
I etch these words in my head, I'll never forget,
I am nothing without you,

I am nothing without you,
I am nothing without you,
I etch these words in my head, I'll never forget,
I am nothing without you,

It's only three stanza's long, so hopefully, the repeats allow it to sink in. By the way, the first line of the chorus (I am nothing without you) is quite catchy in a strange and sad way.

Cheers for reading

WB
#2February 22nd, 2007 · 09:19 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
  NIIIIICE!!     

I like!
#3February 22nd, 2007 · 09:56 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Your a 'Soppy Poo!'            

But I like it, I actually like it a lot!
I really really like the third, it is quite particularly powerful, especially the first two lines!

I am nothing, without you! yes it is very catchy, totally soppy but very catchy.
It's exactly what every woman wants to hear!!!!! 
See! Kine already thinks your wonderful !! lol
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