#1April 7th, 2007 · 02:50 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Brainchild
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This song is not in a battle


Lyrics here: http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/48677.html
Or read here:
Brainchild
I've got a one way ticket to a lonely planet,
And I think that I should go,
Because no-one here needs me and no-one here wants me,
I doubt they'd ever know,

Chorus:
And I'm all alone, and my heart's impaired,
I will never change the way you never cared,And I'm all messed up and I'm out of place,
And I'll hide in the furthest corner of space,
In my heart,

Leave me all alone, in this barren land,
I'm kicking up a desert from the sand,
You will never need me and you will never want me,
But your heart doesn't follow plans,
You will never know me, you don't understand me,
You will never know,

I'm all alone,
My heart is a stone,
I am feeling so lost,
In the darkest coldest corner of space,
Chorus:
I'm all alone and my heart's impaired,
I will never change the way you never cared,
And I'm all messed up and I'm out of place,
And I'll hide in the furthest corner of space,
In my heart...
In my heart...

And my blood's pumping through my veins,
I'm still alive, I'm still alive,
And my heart's in pieces, but I'm still breathing,
I'm still alive...

Chorus:
I'm all alone and my heart's impaired,
I will never change the way you never cared,
And I'm all messed up and I'm out of place,
And I'll hide in the furthest corner of space,
In my heart...
In my heart...
In my heart...

This has the electronic/synth sound that can be filled out with vox (collab anyone?) but the last phrase before the piano outro is just for the sound (pattern: "And my blood's pumping through my veins, I'm still alive, I'm still alive, And my heart's in pieces, but I'm still breathing, I'm still alive..." not sung).

I have about a dozen songs I'd like to do in this fashion, so if anyone wants to lend their voice for the whole lot, then that would be awesome, if not, I'm sure I can get through one by one.
Hope you like 'em, because these are my real "song" songs, meant to be more than the electronic music it is at the moment.

Cheers

WB

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#2April 7th, 2007 · 03:32 AM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
This is REAL soulful! Very nice! I have to bring up the quality of the instruments used again..  Although, I happen to know that you just got your copy of Fl Studio, and it takes awhile to dig in and find the good stuff.  You're truly a talent.  Glad I had the opportunity to listen.
#3April 7th, 2007 · 09:04 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
theres some very good stuff in here, i like the composition alot. I read the lyrics whilst listening to the music. almost as effective as if they were in the song, lol. very heartfelt. why dont you sing man? I hate the sound of my own singing but whats your excuse?

Ian
#4April 7th, 2007 · 09:36 PM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
My Excuse
Well, it's not so much as the fear of my own voice, it's more the fact that I don't have a microphone, and even if I hit the right pitch, the recording would probably be a let down, so, that's why I'm calling upon bandamp to lend me a voice.

Thanks Minds and SirBorris, hope I can continue at this level.

Cheers

WB

P.S If (or maybe when) I can set up for my own recordings I'd probably go for a simple acoustic guitar/voice, as the piano was pretty much the same as what I worked out writing this on acoustic guitar.
#5April 7th, 2007 · 11:24 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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This Is Nice...I love the Piano intro
your improving all the time
Nice work

Will Rate


Flyer
#6April 9th, 2007 · 12:00 AM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
kewl
really kewl composition.. greatness is what I have gotten to the point of being able to bank you from you bro!

Blessings,

Dan - Blue
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