#1April 2nd, 2007 · 03:59 PM
77 threads / 60 songs
943 posts
United Kingdom
Alpha Nine - Collobo
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This is my first attempt at some ambient stuff. I've collaborated with a chap who's name is 'David Newby'. I'm just playing the guitar with percussion played on my guitar, which was layed down first with the aid of a metronome.  It's the first time I've collaborated with someone for a long time. Please give honest comments.

Thanx

Denis

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#2April 2nd, 2007 · 04:17 PM
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Love the music the mix is what im not sure about Dennis I hear some sort of unhealthy separation but I might be wrong.The overall concept is great and as you already know I think very highly of your song writting skills so that said i would work the mix a bit of drop volume on key(stings an such) and a little rev on the guitar (maybe)
#3April 3rd, 2007 · 05:20 AM
51 threads / 36 songs
1,759 posts
United States
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Very Kicked back...I like the vocals at the 2 min give or take mark
perhaps some lyrics/vocals from the begining is what i would like to hear
nice work though
good song

will rate

Flyer
#4April 3rd, 2007 · 03:37 PM
77 threads / 60 songs
943 posts
United Kingdom
Marino wrote…
Love the music the mix is what I'm not sure about Dennis I hear some sort of unhealthy separation but I might be wrong.The overall concept is great and as you already know I think very highly of your song writing skills so that said i would work the mix a bit of drop volume on key(stings an such) and a little rev on the guitar (maybe)

 I've listened carefully to the mix and I can't see much wrong with it personally. Although it was difficult to mix as I'm percussion on the body of my guitar, which I must admit did overpower the normal guitar playing. I would be interested to hear other comments from other members.
#5April 3rd, 2007 · 03:38 PM
77 threads / 60 songs
943 posts
United Kingdom
re: .
FLYER7747 wrote…
Very Kicked back...I like the vocals at the 2 min give or take mark
perhaps some lyrics/vocals from the begining is what i would like to hear
nice work though
good song

will rate

Flyer

Thanx for you comments.

Denis
#6April 3rd, 2007 · 04:20 PM
61 threads / 3 songs
858 posts
United States
Very layed back.  Easy listening.  The only thing Im having a ish with is the VOX.  Sounds a bit mushy!? ever so slighly.....
#7April 4th, 2007 · 12:49 PM
77 threads / 60 songs
943 posts
United Kingdom
MindsAtPlay wrote…
Very layed back.  Easy listening.  The only thing Im having a ish with is the VOX.  Sounds a bit mushy!? ever so slighly.....

The vox are sampled, I only wrote the guitar part.

Thanx for your comments.

Denis
#8April 4th, 2007 · 07:03 PM
124 threads / 32 songs
2,258 posts
Netherlands
Alpha 9! Blip!
Shshshshshsh! Blip!

Amazing song, amazing idea, amazing creation, some bits are a bit rough (for the production that it is) and the rest is totally tripped out!!
I'm getting transported through so many different places and times.
Can I call it 'Monk Music' ?  
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