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#1March 25th, 2007 · 02:49 PM
11 threads / 5 songs
56 posts
United States of America
Tears Run Dry
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I made this song a few weeks ago, the guitar portion is horrible, but I think Marino might be remaking it? Anyways, had to re-upload it, I sang it deeper this time, so I thought it sounded a bit better this time. TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! THANKS!

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#2March 25th, 2007 · 03:04 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Nice Vox Danz!
keep at it sounds good to me!
Nice melody
#3March 25th, 2007 · 05:20 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Tears Run Dry
Great job. and a good song, it's mostly on my left speaker.
Your vocal is loud but darn good!

Yes! a 'Cowboy' song!
From what I could make out I really liked the lyrics, some clever lines in there.
#4March 25th, 2007 · 08:24 PM
11 threads / 5 songs
56 posts
United States of America
Haha, thanks! Still waiting to get a better guitar part
#5March 25th, 2007 · 09:27 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
Nice
Your vocals are good on this..you seem to be at ease with this and just singing from the heart...Good..
nice lyrics...Keep going

Flyer
#6March 26th, 2007 · 01:33 AM
159 threads / 32 songs
1,956 posts
United States of America
I like this song it's good
I like a song that is good without a whole lot to it . down to just a guitar and a great melody .  Your voice has a nice appeal to it .  Like Flyer said "your.......... at ease with this and just singing from the heart"  (well said flyer) .

very good song keep em coming cause you have talent
#7March 26th, 2007 · 05:03 AM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
With flawless guitar this would be incredible.  Fantastic melody.
#8March 26th, 2007 · 08:40 AM
66 threads / 66 songs
153 posts
Italy
very interesting voice. jack
#9March 26th, 2007 · 03:39 PM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
Its good stuff, for sure.  Lower your range just ever so slightly and you got it! Good work, Man!
#10March 26th, 2007 · 05:45 PM
12 threads / 10 songs
64 posts
Germany
interesting vox - reminiscent of something I can't quite place. Good though, really good.
Work on the mix though, sounds like you probably mixed down to mono as I only get one channel coming through.
#11March 27th, 2007 · 01:05 AM
11 threads / 5 songs
56 posts
United States of America
Thanks--yea I need to fix that, but I really don't want to re-upload because then I have to get new comments...
#12March 27th, 2007 · 04:01 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,803 posts
Germany
left side is nice. what can I expect on the right side?
#13March 27th, 2007 · 12:12 PM
11 threads / 5 songs
56 posts
United States of America
Ha, yea--I didn't convert it correctly, that is why its only on one side--but I am planning on adding more to the song with avinashv playing the guitar! So I hope it turns out well! Thanks for the comments guys--any suggestions on what to add? Etc..?
#14March 27th, 2007 · 12:19 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,803 posts
Germany
strings
piano
bass
reverb on the voice (stereo fx)
no drums in the first half of the song but then in the second a slightly played drum or perhaps some percussions only, in that way to make a builtup until to the end of the song
perhaps a solo guitar played with a bottle neck
and I think you must do a kind of chorus. if you cant do it, ask
thats only my personnel suggestion. other minds may have other suggestions. wait for more response. good luck
#15March 27th, 2007 · 12:22 PM
11 threads / 5 songs
56 posts
United States of America
Ah, ok I'll have to find someone to do that then--I'm horrible at music editing or adding instruments, but thank you for pointing out what would go well!
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