okay...after much delay and buffoonery...here is an updated version with lead guitar, backing vox and some keys...feedback is much appreciated.  FYI - the previous version is:

http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3257.html

What's a gal got to do to get some feedback around here? 

Somehow I missed this.....   Akkk

   Sounds pretty good!!  I think the acoustic guitar gets muddied a bit though, but it sounds great...

  I Like the power of it....  Wait...  THe muddiness is maybe in my headphones...  I don't have it in my surround speakers...  One day I'll hook my other speakers back up...

    Very nice... Love the electric...  Drums are awesome....

                JimK

I love the mix and your vocals. Thanks.

hmm i can't write a feedback rigthnow

but I left a (high) vote spoon

I love your voice in this song
the electric guitar solo sounds pretty good too

my favorite part is the chorus w/tecno-atari-keys!!

dodo

Holy WHOA!

OMG Spoon!

This is like
     wH0aAAaaaaaaaaa

This is better than the radio.

Like a thousand times better.

Like...whoa?!

I dunno what to say.

100%+++++. One of the best posts on bandamp, ever!

I like the acoustic feel of this one! Heh it doesn't sound like the surfin 60s at all! This time I'm in the park with friends back when that was still fun and harmless to do, bringing acoustic guitars and tambourines and bits in cans (mid 90's? )

Great mix of vocals, I like that keyboard sound, but the drums could be just a little bit more up in the mix.

For a summery sun in the park sound tho it's 100% ! This should be released as a single (indie wise) with 2 other songs on there (of which the closing song should be "long time to wait", marketed to colleges and universities and I give you a good chance of decent sales :means it:

Good job Soon.Good feel like always!

Thanks guys!  And yes Puppet...this is going on the demo for sure! 

Spoon, this is awesome.

I love your sound and as someone else said, power. You sing like you mean it. I like the edge of the lead complenmented by the quirky-ness of the keyboard/synth (?)

And oh, what a surpirse . . . thought provoking lyrics from Spoon - who would have guessed that huh ? Of course I'm being tongue in cheek . But then, you probably knew that.

But is anyone REALLY in control ?

Nice spoon. Battle material methinks.

Sure they are!  Your life is what you make of it, it's not something that just happens TO you, YOU make it happen.  We all have choices we can make, different paths we can choose, that's what this song is all about.

excellent spoon . . . thank you .

Wise as always