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#1August 30th, 2006 · 03:21 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Control
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This song is not in a battle


well...here's another one of my latest recordings...still in it's early stages...vox are for guide only...nothing is eq'd except the drums (which are awesome btw!) Let me know what you think!

Lyrics:

Is there something that you believe in?
Does it handle your situation?
And we all have got to find some peace of mind.
And we all have got to find some peace of mind.

Chorus
Why wait for something
You can fall back on?
Why stay when there’s a perfectly good road
That you can travel down?
When deep inside you know
                   
That you’re the one who’s in control
You’re the one in control
You’re the one in control

Verse 2
Can you answer every tough question?
Or do you spin out in all directions?
And we all have got to find our way around.
And we all have got to find our way around.

Repeat Chorus

Verse 3
What do you see looking back from your mirror?
Do you find a friend, a trusted counsellor?
And we all have got to find a voice that we can trust.
And we all have got to find a voice that we can trust.

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#2August 30th, 2006 · 03:41 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Even though I wasn't alive in the sixties.......your voice is taking me there right now.....Yes the drums are quite awesome...Are you a fan of Jefferson Airplane by chance?


Ps Love the control parts
#3August 30th, 2006 · 03:45 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
hehehe, yeah, the 60s sound kinda thing once again becomes apparent.

I like the rough mix.. true your voice should be more to the front, I do like them dry like this though.

drums are indeed awesome - the best thing about the mix. anyway it's surely a nice listening experience. Hearing some Dalbello likeness in your voice btw...
#4August 30th, 2006 · 04:54 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
60s eh? maybe I was born too late! 
#5August 30th, 2006 · 05:15 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Control
so get a lawyer...........an an accountant and a manager u r there...............
#6August 31st, 2006 · 09:58 AM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
i got goosebumps because of this spoony.....

        i think your really on to something here... i LOVE this proubley my ultra fave from you  (though that is a tough disission seeing as how you have so many awsome songs, but im sorry to say, fave is hole and bucket, thougt this comes awfly close!)


any way i will rate for you!
#7August 31st, 2006 · 12:16 PM
92 threads / 12 songs
911 posts
United States of America
Yeah. I liked this one.....Before I read any of the comments, I said to myself: "Damn, she sounds a little like Grace Slick on this one!" (to me, that's a complement). The vocals are so good, I feel it deserves a more prominent place in the mix (with a little reverb....). I also agree the drummer is quite good!
#8August 31st, 2006 · 12:39 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
excellent tune spoon.

being critical on the mix here... I'd either raise the volume on the vox, or lower the volume on the acoustic guitar. eh, I'd rather hear the vox louder.

got a vote.
#9August 31st, 2006 · 12:40 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
now I'm reading the description... you've already commented on the vox...
#10August 31st, 2006 · 06:26 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
52 posts
United Kingdom
another chatchy tune!
#11August 31st, 2006 · 06:33 PM
21 threads
235 posts
United Kingdom
Hmmm, don't know about the 60s. Born, ooo, about 29 years too late.
Like the tune though. Not one of my favs from you, but you should take that s a compliment.
Voted!
KI
#12September 2nd, 2006 · 06:40 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Just bring the vocals up a bit - don't change the singing though cos it's got tons of passion in it, and sounds great!

Yup the drums are very good indeed (cymbals a bit loud a couple of times though )

I like the bass tone - the bass line could just be varied a little more I think to make it more interesting.  Perhaps just jump an octave every now and then.

Nice simple guitar work - it works well to keep the song driving forwards

This is a pretty damn good recording Spoony - the mix can be played a little, but there's not too much that can be done to improve the actual "song"
Construction is nice - again it's simple, but it works well.

I do like your voice - make it LOUDER!!!

Good song all round really
#13September 2nd, 2006 · 07:18 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
41 posts
Indonesia
Catchy Tunes...... Nice

Votes from me no problem.....
#14September 2nd, 2006 · 12:21 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
3 posts
United Kingdom
Catchy, nice work.
#15September 2nd, 2006 · 06:35 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
145 posts
United States of America
Whats left to say?

Reiterate: Vox too soft, cymbals too loud at points. This is all i noticed

Great tune, I was tapping my mouse the whole way through.
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