it has a metallica one sound to it
i really liked the guitar work in it.
Nicely Done!
i really liked the guitar work in it.
Nicely Done!
I really like the dark atmosphere created, although it would have been nice to hear some strumming changes. Like everyone else said the lead is too quiet but it was a good lead, definitely re-record to show off the chops man!
Dark Bm Guitar Piece |
nice stuff
I know you know the lead line needs work, as far as the sound goes, so I won’t dwell on that. What you do need to focus on, and this is a good piece to start with, is compositional dynamic. You could take this piece and probably get two relatively similar “parts” from it. Take those and polish them, and work up some contrasting parts – dynamic builds – tempo changes – tonal and texture changes . . . Let B minor act as a springboard for another tonality, and then revisit it at the end.
I really love that track! Its kind of a cross between some of metallicas accoustic stuff and slayer's intro to Seasons in the abyss, though that major part in the middle completley threw me. Other than that just agreeing with what everyone else has said more or less.
Bm |
great intro to a song or a "walking somewhere" soundtrack piece
I dont know I really didn't like it. Fr starters it felt a lot like Joe Satriani's tears in the rain. But that turned out to be a false alarm. However the sound is awesome. BUt it feels like it is promising a lot and then cheating on you. I can't hear the lead. The picking is monotonous. The are too few changes. I don't know... it was like while i was hearing it I was waiting for stuff to happen but it never did.
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