Dark Bm guitar piece |
Rate it for how the music is, how well you think the composition is written.
Rate it for the tonality of the whole thing, but don't rate it poorly because you don't like the style or you think a guitar solo shouldn't go on that long, rate it for what it is, so i can accurately guage how good you actually think the music is, for what it is.
This was done with a line6 guitarport, standard strat, lots or reverb, and sony acid recording studio program.
Rate it for the tonality of the whole thing, but don't rate it poorly because you don't like the style or you think a guitar solo shouldn't go on that long, rate it for what it is, so i can accurately guage how good you actually think the music is, for what it is.
This was done with a line6 guitarport, standard strat, lots or reverb, and sony acid recording studio program.
I really like the tone that you are getting through the line6 plus like that sort of rhythm line. You really should put somesort of feel change in there as it becomes a little tedious. I know you're aware of it so definately fix up the levels. I wanna hear some of that solo action.
Keep jammin.
Keep jammin.
I love Bm (favorite key, don't ask why). This is some good stuff, I just get the feeling at times that isn't going anywhere. That might have to with having the lead at so low a level and no vocals.
AaronKraft47 wrote…
I just get the feeling at times that isn't going anywhere. That might have to with having the lead at so low a level and no vocals.
this is a good start to a song but it lacks hook and variety. It sounds at places that your very major rhythm is at odds with the lead.
Nice rhythm line and tone. Horrible lead tone and definition.
I agree that it sounds like you are thinking about it a bit too much in places...sounds a little mechanical at times, I'd like to hear your pure expression shine through (as I'm sure it can) for this kind of chilled song.
The best bit of the song in my opinion starts at 1m6s, I liked that in particular.
Nice composition that flows well, I'd love to hear it recorded with the rhythm double-tracked hard panned to either side and a softly-smooth lead sat nicely in the middle to cut through that mix.
I look forward to hearing more
I agree that it sounds like you are thinking about it a bit too much in places...sounds a little mechanical at times, I'd like to hear your pure expression shine through (as I'm sure it can) for this kind of chilled song.
The best bit of the song in my opinion starts at 1m6s, I liked that in particular.
Nice composition that flows well, I'd love to hear it recorded with the rhythm double-tracked hard panned to either side and a softly-smooth lead sat nicely in the middle to cut through that mix.
I look forward to hearing more
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