You have a good voice
But the recording to me is a bit flat and I am missing a bass line definately.
the quality is crappy. But you know that as well. mp3 isnt that good, perhaps you can mess around with some mp3 configurations.

Really nice song. Good luck.

Here's another Yes! for you.
Very nice vocals indeed, I understand the recording concern but as toastedgoat said "I can hear everything well".
O yes thank for reminding us that you are PUNK! I would have actually missed that point if you hadn't have said so! lol

Very nicely put together.Sothing and clean.Bring up the bass a bit to give it more bottom and you're set.Vox is also well placed.