si te vas (if you go)
ballad: 1 voice, 1 guitar, 1 rhythm box
we forgot...  WE ARE PUNK ! old but punk.

the record quality is not good. instruments sound as if they have been compressed into small little box. vocals sound clear and good.

you are right nobster, this is just a rehearsal. thanks you for advice

well practice makes you better if not perfect.............so keep digging till you reach your bones

good luck on your recording

I would like to know what the song is about...
The recording is really bad (but you're not alone  )

this song is about fear for broken love, I'll try to translate to english as soon as i can
thanks to you all for posting
the spanish text goes like this:

si te vas
encontraré la casa como la dejé
cuando me fui por la mañana, si te vas
si te vas
tendré que dejar de quererte
en 2 días o 3
si quiero sobrevivir, si te vas
y lloraré, sufriré, me deprimiré...
si te vas
nadie me achuchará cuando vuelva
al atardecer y al anochecer
...
y ríos de melancolía se desbordaran, si te vas

no problems here especially as resources limited
you have good voice
keep on writing songs
the recording aint bad as i think done on one mike no multi trackin?
i like and i vote too

more i listen 10th time i more i like

splash

the recording is multi track, but done during the rehershal without any care. the mixing is awfull (on a cheap mp3 recorder) i promise to improve.

thanx again and i splash too.

Hey man I love this.  I love the singing voice - My spanish is really bad but the melody is lovely and the voice really makes the song.  Thanks.

This is a nice clasic-style ballad... the melody line is very nice but I'd like to hear a not so simplistic background for  it. Keep working, it's worth the effort.

Mucha suerte.

bowlieboy1978 and aetheris thank you both for your comments, muchas gracias! we will try to do better!

This is really beautiful..yes the recording does need to be worked on some..but all in all its not that bad of a recording...I like the music  and the vocals are really nice

Flyer

well... this is a good ballad, reminds me the 70's mexican  groups.

I hope you can improve your quality recording.

buena suerte y bienvenidos!!

Dodo

Ps i left a vote!

The recording doesnt bother me at all. Very good singer, the guitar fits nicely inbetween verses and overall its a good enjoyable song to listen to.

Real good playing, I like the singers voice a lot. the recording is surprisingly clean and pretty good separation. I mean I can hear everything well.  very nice song  gets high vote from me