I like all the sounds in this song and how it starts off then goes into the heavy riffs. I thought that it was put together pretty well.

Wow, this must be shit.........................lmao     I know I need to re mix the harmonics they are ear splitting loud. Thanks Stratocaster and......well nobody else as you are the only comment.....

yeah yeah, i have a job too which keeps me from the amp now and then

but you already know i liked the piece alot, pleasantly surprised with this after V1
from an intro till a complete song, my compliments
vocals are quite convincing , lyrics are fun, music nicely heavy.., sounds ok to me
is it finished? should i vote? well.., i give it a fat 90 anyway

Whats with the link, women and children first, BC is about to play!

This is full-on which ever way you see it.

I had to go back through some of your music to see if this was your 'style' I got a bit confused

I'm Ok now thank you after hearing this all my 'brain' problems are gone!

Ya, Its time to play! On a serious note.....I love the heavy stuff Ive just haven't been able to lay something down that is original enough(always ends up like Metallica mostly) So when I played that riff I was like woah I can take this one and run...so I did...I still need a bass line..(anyone?) lmao and need to remix the harmonics but other than that I'm happy with it.

As far as style goes...major influences are Metallica,Pantera,GodSmack,Limp Bitzkit,System of the Down......Ramones, Green Day and anything new wave and alternative  lol..oh and Hank Williams Sr,Buddy Holly...shall I continue? anyways....Now I feel better I have 3 responses......now the post was worth the effort..

There you are - singing!  Sounds pretty good BC....really love that squeaky theramin-type sound that rings through the verse..it's like Scooby Doo meets Pantera.  I like the changes..they keep it interesting...can you post the lyrics please...I can't make them all out.  Like the sirens, and that ending bit was pretty cool too but my favourite part was the intro...it was all creepy and dark and heavy...chills man...chills.

Hey look what I found while I was digging deep in the archive!

Well it dose start like something you'd find in a treasure chest at the bottom of some dark cave!

Whoever your influences are, I couldn't help but hear, Little pig, little pig....... !
But then you know how I hear things!

Well thanks, here ya go.......oh Im a huge fan of Scooby Doo Lmao

      
                                  Saturated

The bricks form around a foundation of lies
Hiding , comforting the sounds of our cries
Dad's a doctor,  Mom's a nurse
Im their patient, burdened and cursed                   Verse 1
Air is thick in this desolate place
It's  hard to swallow, hard to taste
Is today when I wake from this dream?
In  purgatory, erase my memory
Fake smiles line up down the F''n hall
Dad's been drinkin now he's ten feet tall
Breathing dragon fire, needs to be slain
Here we go again


screaming, fighting, lying, deceiving
I cant take much more of this insanity
Why is it like this, I dont deserve it
I have  done nothing to bring out your rage
Here we go again!                                       Chorus
screaming, fighting, lying, deceiving
I cant take much more of this insanity
Please for my sake

You stupid bitch, get the F over here
Do the F''n dishes  bring me a beer
Are you F'n deaf ?  move your fat ass
I see red in your forecast
Bruised and battered you will not break her
Shes everything your not, hear our laughter        Verse 2
 so pathetic and weak it makes us sick
Our. fear is not respect


Chorus


Please........for our  sake   x2     
Please for my sake                                                Break

Yeah it's good, I like it a lot.
A bass guitar'd be good.
why did you wipe off the "fuck" words?
Whomever the lyrics refer to deserves a audible swearing  

Yes I agree, however this site has lots of young listeners and I didn't want to offend anyone, also while listening to the uncensored version I felt really uncomfortable in the second verse listening to me say those things...I felt as if I was encouraging/ glorifying that behavior.

So you like it then.......excellent, I think it was Kings who mentioned this needs a "Geo" style bass line, If your interested you can Pm your email and I'll send  you the track.

you know the Flyer is old school bro....I like the lyrics and at times the music does sound good
I think the intro is a bit long
I do like the way you change the tempo
I like the flow of the chorus music
but after the chorus it goes back to Flyers no where land
the recording is good..I see you put alot of effort in this
I like your determination Brother ..this you know
This is your style
Hard to believe we did a damn good collaboration together
our styles are so different..but this is a good thing
your the Man Jason     Keep ROCKING  Brother

your friend

Flyer

u just dont hang about............
the vocal a bit down in the mix on this one...............
great changes of tempo ................... do you play all of this.......?
................. the words need to be a bit up in the mix cos your lyrics are the reason

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swordfish

#1 fan eh? LMAO Anyways, ya I play it all except the outro after the delayed drums..I increased the tempo on the chorus track with audacity for that....after Geo hopefully does a wicked bass line for this I will remix everything cause I think the harmonics are too loud and drowning out the vocals...thanks!

Nice accomplised sound.  Production is nice with sirens, completes the whole thing.  In the beginning I was getting a late eighties nostalgic sound and later a slightly mid nineties sound.  Lyrics definetly today.