Definately a Zepplin feel 

This could become something great with a little work.  It feels a bit 'rough', as though you are just experimenting with the sound here.  The lyrics are definately sung with emotion {your wife is lucky:p} Hope you add more 'guts' to this, and turn it into a complete song.

It's obvious the inspiration behind this song is something very real, which shows up in the lyrics.
Some timing issues are really the only thing keeping this song off the charts.

Keep working on your rhythm and try to keep your wife around for further inspiration...