and another one without lyrics

This sounds nice. Perhaps you should put more bass in the guitars, and put them more forward in the mix.

Finish it

Greetz

RazoR

Hey I've put this in my playlist because a) I like it and b) I'd like to try and format/work out this lyric I have in my head for the song,

Unlike RazoR I'm not gifted with being able to make such beautifully music, and I'd love to work with someone looking for lyrics and a singer maybe.

You definitely get a good rockin sound out of that guitar of yours.

I have a song posted here that I wrote, lyrically, sung, vocally and kind'a squeezed out of Cubase, musically:
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3554.html

And I have many many many others written but not yet put to music

I like it, it's cool ! 

I love instrumental rock...