| Benchmark (vocals) |   |
Finally, got some vocals done and decent production. Needs a bit of polishing and some production and a good mix!
Enjoy!!
©1997
Enjoy!!
©1997
I loved the intro solo. In fact, the whole feel of the song was very relaxing. The hardest thing that I find to "self-judge" is if your own song is "enjoyable" (ex. a song can be "good" but you wouldn't listen to it over and over for fun). For me, your song is definetally enjoyable because of its flowing melody. I'd give you a 8.5 out of 10 
Like the lead lick alot..keeps the song moving along...the drums could fill out in places a bit more...the vox are good - they could be louder, and I think I would prefer a little less effect on them (they sound muddy in the chorus).
This is the type of song that should get radio play if produced well...it's catchy, and like Zach said, it's enjoyable
This is the type of song that should get radio play if produced well...it's catchy, and like Zach said, it's enjoyable
ZachBlume wrote…
I loved the intro solo. In fact, the whole feel of the song was very relaxing. The hardest thing that I find to "self-judge" is if your own song is "enjoyable" (ex. a song can be "good" but you wouldn't listen to it over and over for fun). For me, your song is definetally enjoyable because of its flowing melody. I'd give you a 8.5 out of 10 :)
Cheers a million
spoon wrote…
Like the lead lick alot..keeps the song moving along...the drums could fill out in places a bit more...the vox are good - they could be louder, and I think I would prefer a little less effect on them (they sound muddy in the chorus).
This is the type of song that should get radio play if produced well...it's catchy, and like Zach said, it's enjoyable ;)
Song needs to be mixed properly, still rough around the edges but happy with it. Have to live with this mix for a few weeks before committing to a final version. Cheers for the feedback !!
| it's got the parts |
some good writing to build a song of consequence
kick drums seem jerky in places for the light rock feel
kick fits but but does help, IMO
drum needs some development
bass sound mushy, no punch against the jerky kick drum;
bass and drums don't sound as one
benchmark ... sounds like the supercomputing conference next month in Tampa .. who has the macho TFLOPs? ... just kidding
Good song! Enjoyed listening to it.
kick drums seem jerky in places for the light rock feel
kick fits but but does help, IMO
drum needs some development
bass sound mushy, no punch against the jerky kick drum;
bass and drums don't sound as one
benchmark ... sounds like the supercomputing conference next month in Tampa .. who has the macho TFLOPs? ... just kidding
Good song! Enjoyed listening to it.| re: really cool |
kmeroddy wrote…
This is really good.
I really like the vocals, and i dont see a problem with the mix or production side of things(not that i know much about that anyway), it shits on whatever ive done! do you do gigs?and if so where would they be?
we've yet to play live, but the gigs would be in germany, bavaria mostly, munich and nurmberg
cheers for the feedback! much appreciated
| re: it's got the parts |
electronico wrote…
some good writing to build a song of consequence
kick drums seem jerky in places for the light rock feel
kick fits but but does help, IMO
drum needs some development
bass sound mushy, no punch against the jerky kick drum;
bass and drums don't sound as one
benchmark ... sounds like the supercomputing conference next month in Tampa .. who has the macho TFLOPs? ... just kidding
If I had a penny for every time I have to explain the word benchmark
thanks very much for the comment
| good |
great job guys. i love the lyrics
musically the song doesn't have any kind of build up or anything
musically the song doesn't have any kind of build up or anything
| re: good |
izayuh4tthirtone wrote…
great job guys. i love the lyrics
musically the song doesn't have any kind of build up or anything
Cheers! Song is a bit jazzy with a very basic structure but thought the melody is strong enough to carry it through.
| re: I like it! |
ReFlex wrote…
I like it dude!Nice work....that's what I was searching for.Well I'll vote :)
Glad to oblige!
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