This is the memories track with no piano and no plucked leads. 
See (http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3367.html) for the concept of the track and more info.

Nice one but for me the intro is a bit too long but i liked it from 1.30 and 2.40 was lovely and the rest of the song was also very nice I dont think it gets boring so well done

u got some really nice soundscapes in this song mate, use of synths is good especially considering you played it on your laptop keyboard XD, and the double kicks at the end, if i had to change anything it would be your snare hit, it sounds abit lost in the mix and quiet, i'd try changing the single hit to a louder more full snare sound, its a good track and i listened to the whole thing and didnt get bored, actually it seemed to go suprizingly fast so good work, its good to see more electronic music on here, keep it up i like listening to all your stuff

I wish i still had the edit file, but until I can get a full copy of FL studio instead of demo then these are all final productions.  Just waiting for someone to add the piano to it, and plucked harp during the middle bit.  Cheers for the comments tho mate, and I agree with you ont he snare.  Wish I had noticed it myself before finishing the track.  Its actually 2 snare drums but neither have much bass.

wow this is cool stuff.

verry good soundscape here....

it gives a beautiful imagery...

the synths are totally awesome...

cant wait to hear how it sounds with the piano!

i was bored after first 1:25

even then nothing happened

You may well be, seeing as this is the version with no leads in it yet.  Check the other post with the rough leads in it...then reconsider.

could be louder tho