Er...Really, really really good.
One of the best things here.
Good instinct, good vocals, good rythm overall.
Let's listen to some progress...
Keep it up.

WOW! Dude you have the most amazing voice I've ever heard from this side of the Atlantic. PLEASE get the full and finished song on here in stereo soon. I'd put money on you winning the battle mate, keep it up

Thanks again everyone for all your critiques! Should be getting round to recording the finished song pretty soon.

Slow indeed! But nice, very nice.
I would not spend more words to it, because the quotes above are saying enough!

Hey pete. Roxy here from South Africa...
Stunning! sounds like a band I know called The View. They r a christian band but they have a similar style of playing music. almost like a jazzy rock...
keep writing music

Sounds good.  If you had better tech, it would sound even better.  Keep up the good work.