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#1May 13th, 2005 · 01:00 AM
Pete
1 threads / 1 songs
7 posts
United Kingdom
Slow
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This is the placeholder for a new MP3 player
Score: 71.3%
Rank: 18th
Battle: 2005-06


My first ever recording so go easy on the criticism! Only in mono which is a bit annoying. Just the two verses so far, can't yet work out a chord progression for the chorus. Comments and suggestions welcome.

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#2May 13th, 2005 · 10:31 PM
Roberto101
7 threads / 6 songs
18 posts
United Kingdom
Gorgeous
#3May 15th, 2005 · 09:02 PM
Johnny
4 threads / 4 songs
16 posts
Brazil
Soft song,I  lilke it!!
#4May 15th, 2005 · 09:34 PM
strawbfanMale.gif
3 threads / 3 songs
20 posts
United States of America
what you have so far,is excellent,vocally you sound alot the the guy in Counting Crowes
#5May 17th, 2005 · 10:28 AM
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13 threads / 13 songs
84 posts
Croatia (Hrvatska)
Nice try, what you could do is make stereo from mono so that u put same thing but on both channels. But sound ok, to bad u don't have chorus yet, but I believe you will think of something soon and post us so we can hear. Good luck and keep rockin'.
#6May 17th, 2005 · 05:36 PM
Pete
1 threads / 1 songs
7 posts
United Kingdom
Thanks for all the critiques, keep 'em coming!
#7May 17th, 2005 · 09:43 PM
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15 threads / 11 songs
147 posts
United States of America
I like the vocals and the guitar work is decent. But you werent going for fancy. I would like to hear alot more from you though.
#8May 18th, 2005 · 05:35 AM
Pete
1 threads / 1 songs
7 posts
United Kingdom
Finally figured out a chorus for this sucker! Just got to write some more lyrics and borrow my mate's audio interface and ill have the whole song recorded.
#9May 19th, 2005 · 07:58 PM
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8 threads / 6 songs
46 posts
Norway
Emotional and nice! Looking forward to the whole song! :-)
#10May 21st, 2005 · 07:46 PM
blueberrybasspl
13 posts
United States of America
I like it. It sounds like something you'd hear on a sad movie. So cool.
#11May 23rd, 2005 · 08:54 PM
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14 threads / 12 songs
177 posts
United States of America
I like it a lot. I hate mono though. If you want me to fix it for you I can. It deserves to be stereo mix. Great job.
#12May 24th, 2005 · 01:20 PM
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18 threads / 15 songs
147 posts
Italy
Maybe it's because I love melancholy and far away sounds but I find this song a little jewel. I love it!
#13May 27th, 2005 · 08:11 AM
Sazzy246
1 posts
United Kingdom
Loving it! be great to hear it when its fully recorded! very John Mayer/Dave Matthews like
#14May 27th, 2005 · 08:38 AM
Plankster
1 posts
United Kingdom
Hey Pete,
Nice one. Get it finished. My studio's available so, no excuse!
#15May 28th, 2005 · 05:31 PM
kat118
1 posts
United Kingdom
wow peter thats amazing i never knew u were that gd, u should go profressional.
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