| Lost My Mind V2.0 |   |
played with the mix added an outro...I know enough already
awesome cool! love the guitar in there! sounding much fatter, getting to industrial techno here, veeeery niiice! reminds me of my first contact with Chemlab... what was that song called again? .... . . . . .. . . . . ahhh, not right now I think.
Anyway! super cool stuff! more of this please
Anyway! super cool stuff! more of this please
i like the V2.0 better than the former version. reminds me of the mortal kombat sound track. techno is not what i normally put up with, but this one is awesome with the guitars put in. the sudden change into the outro is a very good variation. the whole thing is impressive. may be you should put this version into the battle. 
| lost my mind |
I didn't hear your original version to this if it is still on this forum I am going to check it out
so that I can compare like everyone else
Your outro may need to be blended better but overall it is very well done
the mix sounds fine to me. - Mark from GRUNTLED
so that I can compare like everyone else
Your outro may need to be blended better but overall it is very well done
the mix sounds fine to me. - Mark from GRUNTLED
nobster wrote…
i like the V2.0 better than the former version. reminds me of the mortal kombat sound track. techno is not what i normally put up with, but this one is awesome with the guitars put in. i sudden change into the outro is a very good variation. the whole thing is impressive. may be you should put this version into the battle. :D
Well thanks, I entered it in the November battle.
GRUNTLED wrote…
I didn't hear your original version to this if it is still on this forum I am going to check it out
so that I can compare like everyone else
Your outro may need to be blended better but overall it is very well done
the mix sounds fine to me. - Mark from GRUNTLED
:razz:
Thanks!
OK, just listened to the first version of this and thought it pretty good...... this one has been tidied up a bit it seems. The addition of the guitar very good - and I like the ending (although think I would have had that as a 12 bar break, and brought the techno stuff back in had I done it).
But this gets a couple more points in the votes from me because of the improvements
But this gets a couple more points in the votes from me because of the improvements
Pro: There's a lot of good ideas in this. If I was in a club and this came on I could have a lot of fun with it.
Con: I listened to this twice and I didn't hear a song in it anywhere. I wouldn't want to put this on in my car stereo.
Suggestions: Kill that last wierd part that starts at 2:45
Here's the problem I see. You have like 5 sections that are so different from each other that they don't combine to form something memorable (each of the sections though is good). If I were you I'd take the entire thing apart and start building from each chunk.(with chord changes, vocals heavily processed with effects, etc...)
If your aim is not to produce "songs" then disregard all of the above.
Con: I listened to this twice and I didn't hear a song in it anywhere. I wouldn't want to put this on in my car stereo.
Suggestions: Kill that last wierd part that starts at 2:45
Here's the problem I see. You have like 5 sections that are so different from each other that they don't combine to form something memorable (each of the sections though is good). If I were you I'd take the entire thing apart and start building from each chunk.(with chord changes, vocals heavily processed with effects, etc...)
If your aim is not to produce "songs" then disregard all of the above.
NCSeattle wrote…
Pro: There's a lot of good ideas in this. If I was in a club and this came on I could have a lot of fun with it.
Con: I listened to this twice and I didn't hear a song in it anywhere. I wouldn't want to put this on in my car stereo.
Suggestions: Kill that last wierd part that starts at 2:45
Here's the problem I see. You have like 5 sections that are so different from each other that they don't combine to form something memorable (each of the sections though is good). If I were you I'd take the entire thing apart and start building from each chunk.(with chord changes, vocals heavily processed with effects, etc...)
If your aim is not to produce "songs" then disregard all of the above.
Thanks, actually I dont really know what Im doing with this style.If youve listened to any of my other "songs" you will see that this is way out of the box..thanks for the review. Also the weird part at 2:45 is a little piece of wht I like to do.I added it after Spoon suggested incorporating my guitar somehow. The first version doesnt have it or any guitar.
| Let's party |
At one time in my life it did some serious clubbin'.
And this track could really rock the house.
I heard both versions and this one is awesome, trust me.
If this is out of your box as a rocker it maby is beginners luck but it will do the trick
Very cool tune, i vote for it.
Grtzz ScanVoice
And this track could really rock the house.
I heard both versions and this one is awesome, trust me.
If this is out of your box as a rocker it maby is beginners luck but it will do the trick
Very cool tune, i vote for it.
Grtzz ScanVoice
| re: Let's party |
ScanVoice wrote…
At one time in my life it did some serious clubbin'.
And this track could really rock the house.
I heard both versions and this one is awesome, trust me.
If this is out of your box as a rocker it maby is beginners luck but it will do the trick
Very cool tune, i vote for it.
Grtzz ScanVoice
Well thanks.........definitely not a prodigy here lmao........thanks again
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