awesome music

Very catchy. Good job man.

Yeah, I like this as well. I especially enjoy knowing this is all "hard-parts"
instrumentation. I agree with most of the comments about the production, but this is an offerring I can get excited about! It's got "hook", but it's not "cliched". It's got popular appeal, but it also rocks. I actually don't mind the fading finish (it sounds like the guitarist...who is you, I imagine, is just getting ready to "get off" as the song fades out). By the way, the drumming is excellent!

Just wrote a wordy review about this song that got lost in the ether somewhere!  Anyhow, if I can remember basically I like the song
There are a few problems with the timing (as you mention yourself), and the acoustic strumming is a little on the loose side (a problem I suffer from BIG time ) The production could do with a little work as well I feel.

Overall though, it's well sung - I think the vocals suit the music - and it's pretty well played. 
As a first song post on BandAMP this is really good stuff.
I enjoyed listening (3 times) and look forward to hearing more of your work.

awesome acoustic guitar

first thanks for the comment
second, this song is awesome, the voice fits perfectly into the whole setup of the song. also the recording is good quality i enjoy listening to it