songish...bout being a drunk. angry sounding guitar,confused harmonica, loss for words. sorry for bad quality.

well the guitar wasnt so heavy when recorded,but i changed the pitch up and down and liked the sound. not a very practiced or good singer,but at least im aware of it. perserverance, long word that.

I'm sorry, i just listened to this. I'm gonna go jump off my roof... again

um... yeah..

Sorry im so negative, don't let me discourage you. I just can't listen to it right now cuz it's so crude

oh well,sure if you survive your jump,come back agian and it might sound better!
Dont worry, i know im no genius, i just wanted to see if anyone could listen to it, if its not your cup of tea its not your cup of tea.

This works....

   The poor quality actually adds to the emotion, and makes it really get the point across..

 As you said, it's about being a drunk, and the title, today a promise, it is exactly as it feels to be an alchoholic, trying to get past the addiction, and slipping, and sobering, and slipping again..  the frustration, the confusion, the anger... This is actually really cool, whether or not you meant for it to happen, you have created a nice artistic soundscape here....  Kudos my man!

             JimK

Man, this is from another planet... 8-) I mean it sounds so bad to me, that it actually enters another dimension and in that dimension I kinda agree with JimK... 8-)
But let me tell you something - if Bob Dylan recorded this, it would be talked about as artistic masterpiece.

I can't vote on this, but that's all I have to say about it... 8-)

thanks for the nice words.....not really a dylan fan,strange that its a bit like him then.

seriously are you kidding?
what do you expect?
any votes? any comments? thought your last post was bad but this one is more than that.

um I wrote a drunkard song once... think I now have a reason to upload it.

I think the effect of pitching up and then down, creating that odd modulation stuff is very experimental. but experimental comes out best when in combination with a few really crisp tracks in there. try havin' it with fruity loops for a bit, for some crispy drum patterns and synths. it'll add a lot.

as for the rest I largely go with what JimkDaAdtman said.

i dont really expect much from anyone to be honest, mr keyboarder..... im a beginner....isnt that part of the joy of bandamp? that it puts good musician in the position to help, rather than simply criticise?

lol i love you man this is great this makes me want to sit back and laugh at the world lmao and every one else lay off, lol im a beginner and no body says rude and crude things to me and you all know how bad i am at this stuff lol, at least he can play an insterment

your my new best friend man welcome to the amp, were glad to have you here stop by my page any time and say hi

- the girl made of paper
paper doll

if the recording quality was a bit better this would be awesome, i really like it. It's very easy to listen to. This seems like something very pure and raw without being annoying or in your face or just plain shitty for the sake of being shitty, which is pretty refreshing to me.

its awesome man i love it (I mean the noise) Now I am a crash test dummy for your songs

hey whisteling. I cant do that. never learned . how could you teach me in whisteling?

Love the ending chord

wow that...sucked sry work on recording a listen to your chord progressions a little more b4 u do another song like this

Got real drunk on tequila and think I might have played this same song .
hey people keep telling me to be more original with my writing WELL NOW, i think you have accomplished that already.