This is a good one and I can call it a song. Mike Oldfield did the same distortion and he is famous now. I like the slide guitar and esp. the vocals. It has an amazing ending. Good work!!!
like the song good to listen to,
sounds a bit too ... digital and computerised for me though, im not sure, something just sounds like it could be done better or different .... cant put my finger on it though sorry ..
but good song i like it 80%
sounds a bit too ... digital and computerised for me though, im not sure, something just sounds like it could be done better or different .... cant put my finger on it though sorry ..
but good song i like it 80%
nice song |
The mix is real good on this song. very clear and crisp the vocals have a great "feel" to them. Nice tempo and arrangement. On one hand I like the diffrent sounding guitars, but
on the other hand I think a nice warm slightly distorted guitar might sound good too.
cool tune
on the other hand I think a nice warm slightly distorted guitar might sound good too.
cool tune
I liked the verse and sounds you have. I don't like the switch from verse to chorus. You have this really nice feel and laid back attitude for the verse with really nice sounds then you just throw it all away when you move to the chorus, you try to force some power and it although, doesnt sound too bad, i mean you did a good job in making it sound better but seriously it doesnt need to be there.
Thats my main critique, You put a chorus which doesnt need to be there and tried hard to make it fit when you should go for a complete different approach to the chorus instead of trying to work with what you got.
The guitar solo was good, i quite liked it and its good to stay in the song but by having that chorus you have there, it kind of ruins the solo, thats why people are telling you to change the sound of the guitar for the solo. My opinion, change the chorus and leave the solo the way it is because its fits much more naturally into this song than the chorus does.
You got something really good here, i thought i was in for an absolute awesome song but i really did feel the chorus was the weak spot and the uninvited guest in this song.
Thats my main critique, You put a chorus which doesnt need to be there and tried hard to make it fit when you should go for a complete different approach to the chorus instead of trying to work with what you got.
The guitar solo was good, i quite liked it and its good to stay in the song but by having that chorus you have there, it kind of ruins the solo, thats why people are telling you to change the sound of the guitar for the solo. My opinion, change the chorus and leave the solo the way it is because its fits much more naturally into this song than the chorus does.
You got something really good here, i thought i was in for an absolute awesome song but i really did feel the chorus was the weak spot and the uninvited guest in this song.
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