i don't feel the love with  this tune, i get sleep

nice try, you can do two things:

a noodle or a meditation song

Dodo, Noodle Knight Sir Axealot

hey rahul..
they are not the lyrics..
they are abt the song!!!!

just a suggestion but shouldnt you go with a real piano or a quality electric one? I know its midi but it almost sounds like your playing with one the little piano's you buy at the liquor store . . . those one's that come in the major key (doe rae mi) and has  tiny little sheet music that shows how to play happy birthday and nursery rymes.  Perhaps the feel is a bit little boyish . . . just my opinion of course.

DJ randygroove
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The song has a great potential if arranged professionally, good work though

Interesting harmony...and I smell some ethnic elements.. Or my nose is lying to me?