I'm sorry blueyes....I think this desperately needs a fast part with lots of drums and bass and guitar and everything louder....as a bridge, and then falling back into the original except with that heavier guitar in the background like is already there. REALLY COOL nonetheless!

i like it very much

Very Nice I like your style very cool. This song is very nice very melodic. Words are great and guitar is stellar. Keep up the great work.

TheNewIndieKid